Some Feedback On My Solo, Wrote this for my technical metal band |
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Jun 27 2008, 10:18 AM
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Hey.
I wrote this solo for my technical metal band, for a song that I've written named fragile. First of all, I'd really like some critic on it, what's good and what should be changed or replaced. Please bring your own ideas if you want  And for bar 28 I just had no idea what to do, so please help me out there  Then I'd also be very happy if someone could help me with how I possibly could play bar 21. Now I do like this, but maybe there is a better way to do it: -22------20--------18/-17-------17/-15-------15/-13--------------- ------20---------------------15-----------13------------11--10----- ----------------19----------------------------------------------------- 4------4---4----3---2--(2)---1----3--(3)--1----3--(3)--1----1 4 = pinky, 3 = ring finger etc. *edit* The bass track is horrible, help with making a decent backing would be wonderful! Provided the solo for now in GP5 and GP4 format  Enjoy and thanks! Kim This post has been edited by X-Ray: Jun 27 2008, 02:50 PM
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Fragile_Guitar_solo_1.gp5 ( 11.45K )
Number of downloads: 185
Fragile_Guitar_solo_1.gp4 ( 7.32K )
Number of downloads: 145 |
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Jun 27 2008, 10:09 PM
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i see a great track in there .nicely done and nice solo .
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Jun 28 2008, 03:24 AM
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Well in the moments some notes are skipped out. But all in all it sound ok.
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Jun 28 2008, 11:52 AM
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Hey man.
Great stuff, I like it very much. I feel that the solo definately has a "tech metal" feel to it. That said, I miss one or maybe two other instrument tracks. |
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Jun 28 2008, 12:24 PM
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Good solo, if you're not too happy with the backing i would put a synth in to add some more depth.
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Jul 5 2008, 05:47 AM
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I liked it
Thought it was nicely arranged with suitable notes.Hopefully you'll post a real version of it here sometime soon. -------------------- Guitars: Schecter Stiletto Classic, Jackson SLSMG, Ibanez RG-380 Japan, Gibson Les Paul Studio
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