Feed Back On My Original Song? |
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Jan 11 2013, 03:35 PM
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Hey I wrote this song really quickly yesterday and im looking for feedback! I know it needs work but Ill do that at a later date.
The drums are loops I set up on logic. The Rhythm guitar is just a quick take so there are a couple of mistakes but the lead covers them up a bit and the lead guitar is mostly improvised and its pretty obvious the couple of parts that aren't i think. Anyway here it is. https://soundcloud.com/liammacl45/another-day-unfinished |
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Jan 11 2013, 07:36 PM
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This is beautiful mate! I enjoyed the track as if it were finished and ready in an album. Those melodies are so sweet and tasty.
You are very talented, you definitely should work a bit more the backing and the overall sound and make a clip with this tune. Congrats! -------------------- My lessons
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Jan 11 2013, 08:56 PM
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I hear some RHCP vibe on it ,nice lines and tone Liam, good work
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so, mate, I think that if you chisel it, by coming up with a strong structure and direction of the lines, this has all the chances to turn into a great song!
 
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