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Storm Linnebjerg View Member Profile	Mar 31 2017, 10:16 PM
Mar 31 2017, 10:16 PM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 7.676 Joined: 14-June 08 From: Odense, Denmark	I gave the vocals a shot, and people seem to think it's an okay job. Personally I'm not sure I like the first part, so I want to at least re-record that. Around the chorus/second part, I think it's a bit better. Also, it's just a draft/demo, but it's something after a bit of a hiatus! Let me know what you think. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my TikTok! - or check out my GMC video comments on YouTube

Storm Linnebjerg View Member Profile	Apr 1 2017, 08:02 PM
Apr 1 2017, 08:02 PM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 7.676 Joined: 14-June 08 From: Odense, Denmark	And now with a more Disney like intro Which intro do you like best? With or without backing vocals? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my TikTok! - or check out my GMC video comments on YouTube

Gabriel Leopardi View Member Profile	Apr 1 2017, 08:18 PM
Apr 1 2017, 08:18 PM	Instructor Posts: 36.043 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina	I have to say that I'm moved by listening to this track with your vocals. It's pure magic man. The composition sounds very interesting, and your voice gives this a very fresh air! Your voice is PERFECT for this music, and I think that you should go for this, and start singing all your compositions. This progressive style makes me think on amazing bands like Opeth, Porcupine Tree, Anathema, Steven Wilson and so... You are very talented. I've enjoyed more the first version of the song. Congrats!!!! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel

Storm Linnebjerg View Member Profile	Apr 1 2017, 08:28 PM
Apr 1 2017, 08:28 PM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 7.676 Joined: 14-June 08 From: Odense, Denmark	QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Apr 1 2017, 09:18 PM) I have to say that I'm moved by listening to this track with your vocals. It's pure magic man. The composition sounds very interesting, and your voice gives this a very fresh air! Your voice is PERFECT for this music, and I think that you should go for this, and start singing all your compositions. This progressive style makes me think on amazing bands like Opeth, Porcupine Tree, Anathema, Steven Wilson and so... You are very talented. I've enjoyed more the first version of the song. Congrats!!!! Wow, those are some big words, man! Thanks a lot, Gabriel! I've never really worked on my clean singing, but it's never too late to start practicing You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my TikTok! - or check out my GMC video comments on YouTube

Gabriel Leopardi View Member Profile	Apr 2 2017, 01:15 AM
Apr 2 2017, 01:15 AM	Instructor Posts: 36.043 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina	QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Apr 1 2017, 04:28 PM) Wow, those are some big words, man! Thanks a lot, Gabriel! I've never really worked on my clean singing, but it's never too late to start practicing I've heard you singing clean, growling, screaming, rapping, and it always sounded top level. Go for it!! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel

Storm Linnebjerg View Member Profile	Apr 2 2017, 10:00 PM
Apr 2 2017, 10:00 PM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 7.676 Joined: 14-June 08 From: Odense, Denmark	QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Apr 2 2017, 02:15 AM) I've heard you singing clean, growling, screaming, rapping, and it always sounded top level. Go for it!! Means a lot, Gabriel You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my TikTok! - or check out my GMC video comments on YouTube

klasaine View Member Profile	Apr 3 2017, 12:54 AM
Apr 3 2017, 12:54 AM	GMC:er Posts: 4.552 Joined: 30-December 12 From: Los Angeles, CA	I like version 2 with the background vox. It all sounds good man. I really dig the rhythmic delay on the lead parts (starts at 1:02). My only critiques would be 1 ) lower the kick drum volume. 2) back off the vocal volume a bit. 3) either cut the last note/chord off short or let it hang a bit longer. Good tune. Bravo! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- - Ken Lasaine https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/foolin-the-clouds https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/surfin-at-the-country-hop Soundcloud assorted ... https://soundcloud.com/klasaine3 New record ... http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/kenlasaine Solo Guitar ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...5iIdO2tpgtj25Ke Stuff I'm on ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...b-dhb-4B0KgRY-d

Storm Linnebjerg View Member Profile	Apr 3 2017, 01:06 AM
Apr 3 2017, 01:06 AM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 7.676 Joined: 14-June 08 From: Odense, Denmark	QUOTE (klasaine @ Apr 3 2017, 01:54 AM) I like version 2 with the background vox. It all sounds good man. I really dig the rhythmic delay on the lead parts (starts at 1:02). My only critiques would be 1 ) lower the kick drum volume. 2) back off the vocal volume a bit. 3) either cut the last note/chord off short or let it hang a bit longer. Good tune. Bravo! Thanks for the feedback, man! Much appreciated! I'll check up on those things! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my TikTok! - or check out my GMC video comments on YouTube

bleez View Member Profile	Apr 8 2017, 10:52 AM
Apr 8 2017, 10:52 AM	Experienced Tone Seeker Posts: 3.348 Joined: 4-November 11 From: Scotland	just listened to the latest version on your YT channel. It sounds brilliant, I really dug it. Awesome work, Ben. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- *You say 'minor pentatonic* ' like it's a bad thing**

Todd Simpson View Member Profile	Apr 11 2017, 03:50 AM
Apr 11 2017, 03:50 AM	GMC:er Posts: 25.297 Joined: 23-December 09 From: Atlanta, Georgia, USA	Really great job on this tune. It's great to see a GMCer singing!!! It's hard!! Also, it takes real stones to put yourself out there and have it judged by everyones ears. The good news is, you can really sing!!! Keep it up. It adds a new layer to your sound and separates you from wads of music that doesn't have vocals You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- EVERY QUICK LICK! http://bit.ly/quicklickswithtodd MY INSTRUCTOR FORUM MY SHRED JOURNEY (BOOTCAMP) LESSON NOTES/TABS MY INSTRUCTOR PROFILE @ GMC ME @ YOUTUBE.com ME @ Instagram.com ME @ TWITTER

KenA View Member Profile	Apr 17 2017, 01:00 AM
Apr 17 2017, 01:00 AM	GMC:er Posts: 93 Joined: 16-August 13 From: Born in Brazil - Living in Japan	Are you sure you don't like the intro/first part? I think it's awesome. You have a strong voice and it fits just perfect for this song! In general non-vocalist tend to be good at backing vocals, but you have a lead vocal type voice. You're in the right path! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- ===KenA===

Todd Simpson View Member Profile	Apr 17 2017, 01:19 AM
Apr 17 2017, 01:19 AM	GMC:er Posts: 25.297 Joined: 23-December 09 From: Atlanta, Georgia, USA	I have to agree, I like the intro as well Todd QUOTE (KenA @ Apr 16 2017, 08:00 PM) Are you sure you don't like the intro/first part? I think it's awesome. You have a strong voice and it fits just perfect for this song! In general non-vocalist tend to be good at backing vocals, but you have a lead vocal type voice. You're in the right path! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- EVERY QUICK LICK! http://bit.ly/quicklickswithtodd MY INSTRUCTOR FORUM MY SHRED JOURNEY (BOOTCAMP) LESSON NOTES/TABS MY INSTRUCTOR PROFILE @ GMC ME @ YOUTUBE.com ME @ Instagram.com ME @ TWITTER

Fran View Member Profile	Apr 18 2017, 11:14 AM
Apr 18 2017, 11:14 AM	Learning Rock Star - Wiki Coordinator Posts: 8.451 Joined: 20-November 07 From: Spain	Sounds good to me Cae You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Guitars: Fender American Deluxe Stratocaster, Ibanez RG2570MZ, Epiphone SG G-400 Amp: Vox AC4TVH head + V112TV cab Effects: Vox Satchurator, Vox Time Machine, Dunlop CryBaby, Boss MT-2, Boss CE-5, Boss TU-2, Boss ME-70 Recording: Line-6 POD X3 + FBV-Express, Pandora PX5D GMC wants YOU to take part in our Guitar-Wikipedia! Have a good time reading great articles and writing your own with us in our GUITAR WIKI! Share your playing and get Pro-advice from our Instructors: Join REC

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