Starting This Song So Far - Lifted By Thoughts
skipdaflip
Sep 5 2009, 02:45 PM
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Well... finally there's some sign of life from up here!! tongue.gif
And I'm building a song a the moment... I'm not stuck yet, but like to get some comment from you guys on this song so far!

The lyrics so far are:

Lifted by thoughts


(Spoken)
Sitting near this old dreaming man,
wondering what he's dreaming of.
suddenly he's taking my hand
In a squall, I'm looking through his eyes!


He is showing me the best he could give...
The love, the pain and sorrow he has missed
His youth had given him nothing then pain
But he has done his best to hold and maintain

Could this man take care of his son?
He's suffering, he has failed on this one...
He is showing me ... he like to give more
of his love, but he's old and won't hold it no more

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This post has been edited by skipdaflip: Sep 8 2009, 09:56 PM

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Guitars:
• Ibanez S5470 TKR Prestige
• Ibanez S320 with Dimarzio Air Norton & Dimarzio Tone Zone
• Washburn D10SCE WALNUT DREADNOUGHT SOLID TOP
• Some kind of cheap Guitar...

Amps:
MARSHALL JTM30

Guitar Gear:
Line6 X3 Live
Boss AC-3

Gear:
Edirol UA-25 24 bit/96 kHz USB Audio Capture
Edirol PC-50 MIDI Keyboard Controller
Roland HP203-ERW
Behringer B-1
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- skipdaflip   Starting This Song So Far - Lifted By Thoughts   Sep 5 2009, 02:45 PM
- - audiopaal   Great song so far mate You've come a long way...   Sep 5 2009, 06:17 PM
- - Vasilije Vukmirovic   lyrics are awesome!   Sep 5 2009, 08:21 PM
- - Ivan Milenkovic   This is great man, sounds really cool, and the lyr...   Sep 5 2009, 08:31 PM
- - skipdaflip   Thanks for all the replies!! I'll take...   Sep 5 2009, 09:03 PM
- - kaznie_NL   Where he's thinking of should be What he's...   Sep 6 2009, 07:35 PM
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