Her Presence In Flames |
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Her Presence In Flames |
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Feb 28 2009, 01:21 PM |
[quote name='The Uncreator' date='Feb 27 2009, 01:48 AM' post='345619']
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Her Presence In Flames _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I have been encased, In seering smoke and fire I have had there tools wrought upon me My mind has been reshaped and reformed Attuned to her presence, A darkness inexplicable I must confess that I never studied the game "F.E.A.R" although I heard about it and saw some clips, but isntead of going to read the story, going to annalise this in my way...What it means to me. Again, in another piece of yours, I find the relation of a machine and man, in this case, a man turning into a machine or turning into a super human, perfected by machine. The "Her presence" mention, is unkown to me, because darkness can take many shapes. Her mind awakens to my motions With each breath, Her hands grasp tighter Tortured and imbued with hatred and blessing Each child she bore, ripped from her womb Ok, this is what I wanted... The darkness to be in the shape of a female. This part clearly shows how she influences you. A tree stands at her side As a seraph to its god A mushroom cloud exhalation Leaves her creators burning Description of the land/background...Nice addition My mind is slowly falling from my hands I can't hold in the fear anymore She presses herself upon me in a inferno Her breath against my neck, seering Ok, maybe the transmition of the emotion that gives the game it's name...FEAR! Telesthetic instability Melts away your flesh, Renders you to ash Her pain is the seed, for the apocalypse And I am the father, Of her newest spawn Ok, you were pushed against your will and you created something you didn't want, since you consider it to be bad. Her presence in flames Engulfs me In a distant blue We are united Caught between dementia And insanity A sickening union entwines itself I cannot resist her This touches me...You know it's bad, you know it's the birth of evil, yet you embrace it, cause you can't resist it...Makes me think about my life SOLO A tree stands at her side As a seraph to its god A mushroom cloud exhalation Leaves her creators burning Alma's wrath Has not yet been delivered Must confess, after reading this, I'll search more information about the game C&C Brett https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_fo...showtopic=25023 -------------------- Currently Practicing
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Mar 22 2009, 03:42 PM |
How do you write so well? You have a real talent man!
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