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Posted by: The Uncreator May 15 2008, 11:29 PM

Here is a song of mine, titled "In The Sea Of Sand". Its mostly done, got the intro and the first verse and such done, Got all of it planned out, but I just broke my A String, So I cant record the rest yet for a few more hours, Just wanted to see what you guys though of it

EDIT
I Also wrote lyrics for this, The link is in my sig if you wanna see them

EDIT 2
Whoops, Just realized i recorded all the rhythm guitars in my lead tone.....I uh.....Meant do that.....

In_The_Sea_Of_Sand.mp3 ( 2.93MB ) : 166

Posted by: Eat-Sleep-andJam May 15 2008, 11:39 PM

It sounds great !
I pictured a man trapped in the desert when I listened to this. Maybe hes suicidal ? That would explain the crushing distortion

The lead reminds me of Marty Friedman.

Nice

Edit: OMG I WAS DEAD ON I didnt even read the lyrics till after I posted that ha ha ha ha.
Shows how good this really is .

Posted by: The Uncreator May 15 2008, 11:40 PM

Ah, I'm glad you liked it, And what you pictured was great too, Pretty much what the song is about

Posted by: Hisham Al-Sanea May 16 2008, 09:21 AM

nice track uncreator also it has a melodic composing. i like it

Posted by: Smurkas May 16 2008, 03:27 PM

I must say that I absolutely love the intro riff! I'm a sucker for anything phrygian/phrygian dominant and you nailed a really cool groove with it. I'm not too sure about the rest. It might work great with a band and a singer on top but I think it sounds kind of boring on it's own. Also the song needs a massive chorus to back up your excellent intro.

/Marcus