Deep Blue, New Raw Demo, Progressive Space Metal, I'd call it
Storm Linnebjerg
Apr 1 2016, 09:39 PM
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BOOYAKASHA! New song!



I think I've found my style and genre with this sort of space-ish progressive metal. Really enjoying both recording and writing in this style.

You can also hear the track and my other Lunar Eclipse track on my bandcamp:

https://benjamin-storm.bandcamp.com/

Let me know what you think. It's still not mixed or anything though, so very raw, and some parts I might re-record, but I still wanted to share it with you guys.

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Todd Simpson
Apr 2 2016, 01:12 AM
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Let me be the first to congratulate you a killer track. Keep it up and I'd say put together an E.P. if possible with four or five songs. That way your change and growth as a player can be tracked.

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Storm Linnebjerg
Apr 2 2016, 12:27 PM
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Thanks, Todd! I'm hoping I can write another few songs, call it an EP and then write another 5 more songs or so and call it an album. That would be a dream come true.

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Monica Gheorghev...
Apr 2 2016, 02:44 PM
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Love this song, huge congrats!!! You always had good melodic ideas and definitely this style suits you perfectly wink.gif

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Storm Linnebjerg
Apr 2 2016, 02:58 PM
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QUOTE (Monica Gheorghevici @ Apr 2 2016, 02:44 PM) *
Love this song, huge congrats!!! You always had good melodic ideas and definitely this style suits you perfectly wink.gif


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Apr 2 2016, 03:00 PM
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yes, this is really good stuff indeed. excellent dude smile.gif

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Storm Linnebjerg
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QUOTE (bleez @ Apr 2 2016, 03:00 PM) *
yes, this is really good stuff indeed. excellent dude smile.gif


The compliments keep ticking in! I'm almost getting high from this laugh.gif Thanks, Bleez! biggrin.gif

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Nice! Very cool ideas in the song.

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Storm Linnebjerg
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QUOTE (DeGroot @ Apr 2 2016, 03:39 PM) *
Nice! Very cool ideas in the song.


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Apr 2 2016, 05:07 PM
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I like the vibe. Heavy but spacey, and great guitar playing!

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Storm Linnebjerg
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QUOTE (Rammikin @ Apr 2 2016, 05:07 PM) *
I like the vibe. Heavy but spacey, and great guitar playing!


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I'm so happy Ben! I now how much you've been working in the last time to develop your composing skills and to be able to complete your ideas successfully and this is a proof of your talent. Congrats and keep going!!

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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Apr 2 2016, 06:54 PM) *
I'm so happy Ben! I now how much you've been working in the last time to develop your composing skills and to be able to complete your ideas successfully and this is a proof of your talent. Congrats and keep going!!


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Hi mate !

Big congratulations for this wonderfull composition !! I listened to it through my headphones and this "raw" version allready sounds awesome. I love this style of music !!! GREAT JOB !!!

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Storm Linnebjerg
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QUOTE (nikeman64 @ Apr 3 2016, 06:16 AM) *
Hi mate !

Big congratulations for this wonderfull composition !! I listened to it through my headphones and this "raw" version allready sounds awesome. I love this style of music !!! GREAT JOB !!!


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Very nice - I am digging the progressive style!

I would suggest working on some possible lead melodies now - maybe using a synth sound and then overdubbing with guitar to give it a more organic character. If you come up with a lead melody it will be easier to hand over the project to a singer (if that's what you want to do).

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Storm Linnebjerg
Apr 4 2016, 03:27 PM
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QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Apr 4 2016, 02:41 PM) *
Very nice - I am digging the progressive style!

I would suggest working on some possible lead melodies now - maybe using a synth sound and then overdubbing with guitar to give it a more organic character. If you come up with a lead melody it will be easier to hand over the project to a singer (if that's what you want to do).


Awesome, Kris! Thanks a ton for listening smile.gif I'm strongly considering adding some vocals on this, but I struggle coming up with some Neptune-themed lyrics, whether that's about the planet itself or the roman God Neptune. I plan on making all my tracks about space stuff.

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Apr 4 2016, 09:53 PM
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QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Apr 4 2016, 03:27 PM) *
Awesome, Kris! Thanks a ton for listening smile.gif I'm strongly considering adding some vocals on this, but I struggle coming up with some Neptune-themed lyrics, whether that's about the planet itself or the roman God Neptune. I plan on making all my tracks about space stuff.


Ok sounds cool! But if you struggle with coming up lyrics about this theme - maybe it's not the right theme for you? I personally find it hard to push myself to get creative.

Perhaps there is another theme that's more relevant for you? Ideally you would try to find something you feel strongly about (positive or negative), and just let the vocals 'flow out'.

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Storm Linnebjerg
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QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Apr 4 2016, 09:53 PM) *
Ok sounds cool! But if you struggle with coming up lyrics about this theme - maybe it's not the right theme for you? I personally find it hard to push myself to get creative.

Perhaps there is another theme that's more relevant for you? Ideally you would try to find something you feel strongly about (positive or negative), and just let the vocals 'flow out'.


Well, I had this whole idea of writing something with the theme of planets/roman gods. But I'm not a very good writer of lyrics. smile.gif I'll give it some to and some thinking and see what I can come up with smile.gif

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I say go for it! Lyrics are like guitar, just takes practice smile.gif


QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Apr 4 2016, 04:56 PM) *
Well, I had this whole idea of writing something with the theme of planets/roman gods. But I'm not a very good writer of lyrics. smile.gif I'll give it some to and some thinking and see what I can come up with smile.gif

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