My First Song!, Not tight or well played!
xSK8ANx
Sep 12 2007, 07:06 AM
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Hi:)
I just wanted to share my first song with you folks.
It´s not really finished and the drums just suck cause I don´t have a propper drumsoftware or drums (if so, I would have played the drums myself)

But, I will but out a final version as soon as I get some drums;)

And don´t get picky on the playing and timing... cause I know that´s somthing I´ve gotta work alot on;)
and I´ve only been playing guitar for about 15 months.

Thanks
Kjetil

PS: I´d love some feedback;)
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stratman33
Sep 12 2007, 07:16 AM
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wheres the song?nothin shows up on my computer.

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Nick325
Sep 12 2007, 07:18 AM
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QUOTE (stratman33 @ Sep 12 2007, 02:16 AM) *
wheres the song?nothin shows up on my computer.



same unsure.gif

o its here

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xSK8ANx
Sep 12 2007, 07:20 AM
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try my other post, It´s my first time uploading so maybe I´ve done something wrong?

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Sep 12 2007, 07:26 AM
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QUOTE (xSK8ANx @ Sep 11 2007, 10:06 PM) *
Hi:)
I just wanted to share my first song with you folks.
It´s not really finished and the drums just suck cause I don´t have a propper drumsoftware or drums (if so, I would have played the drums myself)

But, I will but out a final version as soon as I get some drums;)

And don´t get picky on the playing and timing... cause I know that´s somthing I´ve gotta work alot on;)

Thanks
Kjetil

PS: I´d love some feedback;)

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Well it had a nice feel and was well constructed. The solo's in there seemed a bit short and I feel as you improve you could add more to it and possibly switch some of them around because the last solo seemed a bit out of place smile.gif. As for the general sound of the song, It sounded a bit over distorted, which I think kind of blocks out the different riffs and licks.

I think the ending would have sounded really sweet if you just kept up with that acoustic exotic sound and ended it like that smile.gif But overall nice job ! biggrin.gif You first song is a nice one! smile.gif

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xSK8ANx
Sep 12 2007, 07:31 AM
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QUOTE (Eat-Sleep-andJam @ Sep 12 2007, 08:26 AM) *
Well it had a nice feel and was well constructed. The solo's in there seemed a bit short and I feel as you improve you could add more to it and possibly switch some of them around because the last solo seemed a bit out of place smile.gif. As for the general sound of the song, It sounded a bit over distorted, which I think kind of blocks out the different riffs and licks.

I think the ending would have sounded really sweet if you just kept up with that acoustic exotic sound and ended it like that smile.gif But overall nice job ! biggrin.gif You first song is a nice one! smile.gif

- John


Thanx John:)
I´ll work on that. thanks for great tips:)

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