New Tune - Voice And Void, This one is actually under the 10 minute mark this time
The Uncreator
Oct 1 2011, 12:18 AM
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Kind of a revisited song, I mainly added lyrics and music and separated the song into two lyrical sections. One that was mainly the sci-fi part, and the second the personal, human section. I pretty much built around that idea musically, and I liked how it turned out. Let me know what you think! smile.gif

Slight warning, lyrics are just a tad graphic near the end, nothing super gorey or anything but nothing subtle either.

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Voice and Void
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Through the deepest reaches of space
Through the darkest parts of our mind
Into our most feared emotions
We've become travelers in time

Sifting through the fabric of time
Hunting our Jovian beast
Falling prey to an unknown force
Colliding with the quantum world

Faster than the speed of light
Tachyonic speeds have been achieved
Forced into a never ending
Space-time tragedy

Will we ever know something other than the presence of time?
Will we ever be released from the holds of this prison?

Sever the link
Please let us die...


The first to fall was me
Then my loyal crew
Our worlds folding into
A nightmare made reality

Then the isolation
Took my most precious treasure
As I watched my dear love
Slowly take her....

I cannot stress the pain
Beyond the mere physical
I cannot stress the anger
Beyond the mere psychotic

A deafening roar of silence
Permeates throughout the hulls
All that remains of anyone
is but voice and void

I cannot stress the sadness
Beyond the realms of loss
As I watched her slowly
Dig into herself with the knife

6 million years of time
All but a blur
In our wakes

Dilution of the self and mind
Mental collapse
Destitute and blank

Barely anything
Human remains
Nothing but mere shells

Unbeknownst to us
Alien eyes lay upon
A sick experiment


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Daniel Realpe
Oct 1 2011, 01:40 AM
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nice intro dude!

intricate lyrics! good job man,

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Oct 2 2011, 12:52 AM
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Thanks, glad you liked it!

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