New Song In Progress, Feedback would be very appreciated
Dinaga
May 27 2012, 06:49 PM
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Hi guys!

I haven't made a new song for a long time so right now I'm experimenting and trying to make something which would be a mix of neoclassical and modern metal approach. smile.gif Sounds weird but I haven't heard anything like this before so I wanted to give it a shot biggrin.gif

Here's the first version - what I made so far.

The middle section only contains orchestration and drums, I'll fill the middle section with some neoclassical-inspired lead guitar parts later, right now there's just one little solo in the beginning.
As you will probably notice, I took use of the multiple-guitar panning (maybe even overused it? biggrin.gif in one part there's four guitars there stacked biggrin.gif) in the last part, but also in the intro solo.
I'm also not sure about the drums right after the intro solo - it sounds a bit too flashy, maybe I'll put a simpler approach there... It is supposed to have fast guitar parts to serve as a transition to the double-kick theme (the middle part).
The song's far from complete, it will be longer - I'll continue composing after the heavy part...

What do you think? Please point out any flaws you encounter, I'm here to learn wink.gif
Any feedback would be highly appreciated, thanks a lot!

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- Dinaga   New Song In Progress   May 27 2012, 06:49 PM
- - WeePee   I liked when the heavy part kicked in \m/ B...   May 27 2012, 07:41 PM
- - Ben Higgins   Sounds good Dino !! I would just keep goin...   May 27 2012, 07:53 PM
- - Opetholic   Wow D-man, it is great! You are very talented....   May 27 2012, 09:35 PM
- - Dinaga   QUOTE I liked when the heavy part kicked in ...   May 27 2012, 09:49 PM
|- - Ulrik   I really like it! You should get an opera sin...   May 27 2012, 09:59 PM
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- - DeGroot   I like the intro solo! Your note selection/sc...   May 27 2012, 10:41 PM
- - Cosmin Lupu   D-man, this is great everyone had great input, so...   May 28 2012, 03:28 PM
- - Gabriel Leopardi   I like the concept of this piece of music man. Yo...   May 28 2012, 04:59 PM
- - Dinaga   QUOTE I really like it! You should get an ope...   May 28 2012, 08:39 PM
- - Dinaga   I created the second half of the song. I'm g...   May 30 2012, 12:22 AM
|- - WeePee   QUOTE (Dinaga @ May 30 2012, 02:22 AM) I ...   May 30 2012, 04:56 PM
|- - SpaseMoonkey   This is almost like Apocalyptica on guitar! ...   May 30 2012, 06:25 PM
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- - Ben Higgins   I love the second part - very cool ! You'r...   May 30 2012, 09:38 AM
- - FrontlineGuitar   Hey there Dinaga! I think whatever I would sa...   May 30 2012, 06:30 PM
- - Dinaga   Hey guys!! Thanks a lot for your comments...   May 31 2012, 09:44 PM
- - Cosmin Lupu   Mate, I like where this is going, but for the riff...   May 31 2012, 10:09 PM
|- - Dinaga   QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ May 31 2012, 09:09 P...   May 31 2012, 10:18 PM
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- - derper   Sorry to get in on this so late, but I really dig ...   Jun 1 2012, 09:10 PM
- - Cosmin Lupu   Hmmmm, I'll look it up and see what's goin...   Jun 1 2012, 09:13 PM
- - Dinaga   Here's a new version. Now the first part sound...   Jun 2 2012, 11:32 PM
|- - Opetholic   Wow D-Man, I am really digging this piece Especia...   Jun 3 2012, 09:18 AM
|- - Dinaga   QUOTE (Opetholic @ Jun 3 2012, 08:18 AM) ...   Jun 3 2012, 12:21 PM
|- - Opetholic   Man, very nice! You are quite talented and you...   Jun 3 2012, 12:31 PM
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- - WeePee   Oh yes this turned out quite a piece ! And lik...   Jun 3 2012, 06:45 PM
- - Ben Higgins   This is even better now you've added some kill...   Jun 3 2012, 07:56 PM
- - Dinaga   QUOTE (Opetholic @ Jun 3 2012, 11:31 AM) ...   Jun 4 2012, 10:54 AM
- - derper   DUUUUUDE!!! That's awesome! ...   Jun 5 2012, 07:34 PM
|- - Ben Higgins   QUOTE (derper @ Jun 5 2012, 07:34 PM) DUU...   Jun 5 2012, 09:07 PM
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- - Dinaga   Hahaha, you guys really cracked me up   Jun 5 2012, 09:52 PM
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