New Song - Cruising, Instrumental Rock |
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New Song - Cruising, Instrumental Rock |
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Oct 28 2009, 03:50 AM |
Crikey! I've come a long way in a year but there's still so much to improve.
I think timing is my biggest weakness. Also still working on trying to play cleaner. But have a listen and I welcome all feedback. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songI...;songID=8275933 Let me know if link doesn't work, I'll upload it here. Ps. It's my song. This post has been edited by OzRob: Oct 28 2009, 03:53 AM -------------------- |
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Oct 28 2009, 05:28 AM |
Edit: Revised version uploaded to that link. It's much closer to what I'm trying to achieve.
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Oct 30 2009, 06:26 AM |
I like the vibes of this song. However talking about composition I have the sensation of "nothing happened here". I mean.. you introduced some nice ideas in the begining but then you continue wih the same backing improvising (running scales) and I feel that something should happen in the second part of the song. A cool riff, a new memorable melody, a rhythmic change... do you understand what I mean?
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Oct 30 2009, 07:48 AM |
Gabriel, yep I understand. Thx.
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Nov 29 2009, 04:04 AM |
I liked the tune!
On the part where the drums stopped I think the chords in the rhythm guitarcould be played better. -------------------- Visit my:
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