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My Human Darkness

The Uncreator View Member Profile	Jul 3 2009, 04:40 PM
Jul 3 2009, 04:40 PM	Fire Up The Blades, Moderator Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida	_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ My Human Darkness _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ There is no one watching over us There is no one answering your pleas We are alone in a world full of sin On our own in a world full of deception We can walk wherever the wind takes us Or we can follow the path set ahead But nothing we do will ever bear weight We are nothingness In a void of insignificance Aborted from the original design Abstracted out of a known reality A ghost like planet following the path Orbiting an empty sun in an empty universe We can walk wherever we please We can do what we like But don't dare think of faith Don't you dare believe For this is no redemption This is no salvation Our tainted souls wipe the slate clean Don't you dare think of faith Don't even try to believe In anything or anyone Your not meant for them Your not meant for this Just lay down and die Don't even consider loyalty Don't even bother to breathe Do us all a favor and crush your heart Till it no longer beats You can feel empty You can feel sorrow You can feel love You can feel elation I can't a feel anything I don't feel anymore My sins are too great To beget me redemption Don't you dare think of faith Don't even try to believe In anything or anyone Your not meant for them Your not meant for this Just lay down and die Don't even consider loyalty Don't even bother to breathe Do us all a favor and crush your heart Till it no longer beats But what if my sins are my only strength? What if salvation can be found in depression? My own self-loathing must come to an end I no longer forsake what I was, am, or will be My redemption has long since left me to die But my darkness still bears some kind of light Even if I am still damned to be some worthless soul I refuse to drown the breaths of those Who still know how to believe Don't you dare think of faith Don't even try to believe Before you know why you should Your not meant for this world Your not meant for this time Just lay down and... Don't even consider loyalty Don't even bother to breathe Till you know why the human heart Even in death continues to believe © Brett Windnagle, 2008 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ This one is quite hard to explain, But at the same time it isn't. I'll let you deduce what you can from the words. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Santiago Diaz Ga... Santiago Diaz Garces View Member Profile	Jul 4 2009, 03:17 AM
Jul 4 2009, 03:17 AM	GMC:er Posts: 1.769 Joined: 28-April 09 From: Buenos Aires, Argentina	It has the Pain Of Salvation style of lyric!. Very nice man, I liked it a lot You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my lessons! My Band: Thabu Myspace New Thabu Official Site!! My Websites: http://www.santiagodiazgarces.com.ar Myspace

Eat-Sleep-andJam View Member Profile	Jul 7 2009, 04:59 PM
Jul 7 2009, 04:59 PM	GMC:er Posts: 2.412 Joined: 23-February 07 From: New york	QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Jul 3 2009, 08:40 AM) _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ My Human Darkness _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I would like to first say that I like the title of the piece. Very Cool. There is no one watching over us There is no one answering your pleas We are alone in a world full of sin On our own in a world full of deception Nice way to start. Everything connects pretty well. We can walk wherever the wind takes us Or we can follow the path set ahead But nothing we do will ever bear weight We are nothingness In a void of insignificance I like this verse. But I dont like the last two ending words for the last to lines. The point of being insignificant is already pretty much established Imo when you say nothingness. So that is one thing I would pick on . Aborted from the original design Abstracted out of a known reality A ghost like planet following the path Orbiting an empty sun in an empty universe You really do always come through when your talking about space. This is no exception. Nice verse. We can walk wherever we please We can do what we like But don't dare think of faith Don't you dare believe It took me a second to think about it, but I guess this does connect with the space reference. For this is no redemption This is no salvation By this point im pretty much certain that these would fit perfect in like a very hard death metal song. Our tainted souls wipe the slate clean Don't you dare think of faith Don't even try to believe In anything or anyone Your not meant for them Your not meant for this Just lay down and die Don't even consider loyalty Don't even bother to breathe Do us all a favor and crush your heart Till it no longer beats I like how you didnt say dare to believe for the second. That little variation keeps the reader on his or her toes. After reading the whole verse. This kinda through me a curveball. I now appreciate the title more, if you know what i mean. You can feel empty You can feel sorrow You can feel love You can feel elation I can't a feel anything I don't feel anymore My sins are too great To beget me redemption Don't you dare think of faith Don't even try to believe In anything or anyone Your not meant for them Your not meant for this Just lay down and die Don't even consider loyalty Don't even bother to breathe Do us all a favor and crush your heart Till it no longer beats But what if my sins are my only strength? What if salvation can be found in depression? My own self-loathing must come to an end I no longer forsake what I was, am, or will be Finally. You make sense out of all the dark thoughts. Wasn't expecting this to go in this direction but it is nice. My redemption has long since left me to die But my darkness still bears some kind of light Even if I am still damned to be some worthless soul I refuse to drown the breaths of those Who still know how to believe This is my favorite verse thus far ^ !!!! Don't you dare think of faith Don't even try to believe Before you know why you should Your not meant for this world Your not meant for this time Just lay down and... Don't even consider loyalty Don't even bother to breathe Till you know why the human heart Even in death continues to believe Nice to see an end to such a dark but well put together piece. It had alot of power, and the struggle that you were trying to interpret in it( if that is what you were trying to show at all) definitely shines through. Amongst all of your Human Darkness © Brett Windnagle, 2008 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ This one is quite hard to explain, But at the same time it isn't. I'll let you deduce what you can from the words. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Join Me On the Lyrics Board ! "Find something worth dying for... ...And live for it"-The Uncreator

The Uncreator View Member Profile	Jul 8 2009, 02:56 AM
Jul 8 2009, 02:56 AM	Fire Up The Blades, Moderator Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida	Its inspired by the main character in Clive Barker's book "Imajica"...Who trust me has some problems But in the end he does a great and amazing thing You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

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