Pure Steel - Metal Collab - Joe Kataldo, FINAL MIX & COMMENTS! |
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Dec 30 2008, 05:12 PM
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Hi Guys Thanks For Join My First Collabs, you all made a great job
TrackList: 1] Matt23 2]Outlaw2112 3]berko 4]superize 5]Tolek 6]Caelumamittendum 7]Toroso 8]leedbreak 9]Tjchep 10]kaznie_NL 11]Marc_Maiden 12]Dexxter 13]ztevie 14]Oxac 15]kjutte 16]enforcer In the end you will find my take at 05:09 Hi guys, sorry for the delay on comments but...even GMC Instructors are on holidays  I've tried to highlight what you have done good and maybe give you some suggestion/direction to improve, but bear in mind that to be more precise I should have know your age, how long do you played and stuff like that, so...in the ends they just represent my point of view based on recording  
Joe_Kataldo___Pure_Steel___Metal_Collabs.mp3 ( 5.2MB )
Number of downloads: 426Matt23 Really nothing to say here, great solo great intro and flawless playing...Good Job Matt! Bending intonation it's good but you can improve it, same for the vibrato, spend some time with tuner for bending and a metronome for vibrato Outlaw2112 Great intro but you get lost in the middle, ideas are good, but played, sometime, with wrong timing. Try to tap your foot when play or record along with the baking track, and alway practice with a metronome. berko Same problem here good ideas, that could be great, with just a little more precise timing, picking lines are beautiful but in some parts loose their tightness because of timing. one word...metronome  superize Great use of the phrigian mode in the begin, good modal solo in the complex maybe you over used that ascending/descending picking line too much, it's important to keep the listener interested Tolek Nice opening blues/rock lick and tapping, I like the open string part too, I have just one suggestion, try to use less distortion Caelumamittendum A dark tone as I like really nothing to say here, a good mix of melody and shred with wide vibrato, and killing sweeps in the end...good job.Toroso Same problem as some other guys, you have very good melodic ideas, that not express their full potential because of wrong timing...try to work more with metronome and always tap your foot along with backing tracks or live bands leedbreak a very good structured solo, with repetitions and variation to keep the listener interested, the only suggestion I can give is try to work more on tone, specially when recording less distortion means more dynamics Tjchep Here it comes my favourite I love the epic intro the dark tone and the opening vibrato gives me goose bumps, only suggestion is work more on bending intonation not 100% precise but nearly thereP.S. I got inspired from you form my solo  kaznie_NL A nice structured solo with call&answer phrases with surely an uncommon and unique tone, try to work more on timing Marc_Maiden What could I say nice harmony, riffs, and some fusion rhythmic displacement too all played with a good tone and conviction...try to mix the guitar a little bit lower, to better fit in the mix Dexxter a nice solo, enough structured to give to the listener the impression that you know where are you going, good vibrato, picking technique and bending that sometime not 100% in tune but nearly there. Unfortunately the audio quality was quite low and doesn't pay justice to you solo, maybe try to improve this ztevie Nice solo here too, with a structure important to keep the listener interested, very good picking techniques  , I may suggest to experiment with more mids on your amp setting, but this is purely a matter of personal tasteOxac Interesting pickup intro very fluid, unfortunately got a little bit lost in the final mix because of preceding solo. Ideas are good but lack of organization, and needs a more structured form, otherwise sometime may looks like you don't know what you are doing, work on blues soloing may help kjutte Majestic intro, great use of phrigian/phrigian dominat modes, good picking technique and vibrato, good control of harmonics too...probably you improvised it, but if you spend some time organizing better the ideas and give it a more structured form it could be a perfect solo for a metal song enforcer Impressive picking techniques and articulation, ideas are good and interesting specially the final harmony part...two things: try to work more on bending intonation and that second part at 00:13 comes in, too much disconnected from the first one, if you used overdubs, do not cut the tail of the first solo Thanks For Joining Joe Kataldo This post has been edited by Joe Kataldo: Jan 1 2009, 02:49 PM -------------------- ________________________________________________________________________________ |
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Dec 30 2008, 07:40 PM
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Well Joe I dont want to be a pain in the ass but my solo is not on the final track
 you may find it here:My post in the upload thread post number 34 (not the earlier one) This post has been edited by enforcer: Dec 30 2008, 07:41 PM --------------------  incoming spoiler read it at your own risk! Spoiler: it, surely, spoiled me!!! and may the force be with you :) |
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Dec 30 2008, 08:18 PM
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QUOTE (enforcer @ Dec 30 2008, 07:40 PM)  Well Joe I dont want to be a pain in the ass but my solo is not on the final track you may find it here:My post in the upload thread post number 34 (not the earlier one) Pain in the ass...are you joking? I'll correct it right now! -------------------- ________________________________________________________________________________ |
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Dec 30 2008, 08:47 PM
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Fixed! Sorry Dude
Tempo is the same -------------------- ________________________________________________________________________________ |
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Dec 30 2008, 08:54 PM
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Great fun, thanks for your collab efforts.
-------------------- - leedbreak
Practice Makes Perfect, only when it is perfect practice :-) |
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Dec 30 2008, 10:24 PM
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Great mix Joe! This collab is surely hot from shredding!
Eagerly waiting for those comment 
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Dec 30 2008, 10:44 PM
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Thank you and by the way great take Joe
-------------------- incoming spoiler read it at your own risk! Spoiler: it, surely, spoiled me!!! and may the force be with you :) |
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Dec 30 2008, 11:00 PM
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This collab sounds really cool!
There are a lot of awesome takes, congrats guys.I can´t wait for the comments. |
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Dec 31 2008, 02:01 PM
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thanks for putting this together... I know its alot of work running one of these
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Dec 31 2008, 02:23 PM
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Great takes everyone and good job on leading and mixing this one Joe!!!
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Dec 31 2008, 02:39 PM
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I think it sounds really great
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Dec 31 2008, 02:47 PM
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I'm so looking forward to comments! I'm checking every five minutes!
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Life's great!! New Year dinner at work, I won't see any fireworks, and I definitely won't be drinkin' any Absolut Vodka either... This last thing is maybe what pisses me off the most... 
 
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