Pause.breathe. - Kristofer Dahl
Kristofer Dahl
Nov 16 2008, 07:39 PM
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Hi there - I am excited to show you a tune I am currently working on. It's a little aggressive so "soft-poppers" beware! ph34r.gif

Lyric wise I have been trying to capture the feeling of having way-too-many-things-going-on-at-the same time (I am sure there are many other who share this feeling with me). Also I added some general evilness to the text - to make it a little more metal. ( " mad.gif " ...you know unsure.gif )

Any feedback is appreciated!
>>Click here to listen! (old mix here)

Pause.Breathe.
Don't you take what is left of me
Don't tell me what I am supposed to be
Don't you spill what is left of the weak
Don't you pause and don't you breathe

Don't confuse our time with hate
Don't you dare bloody come too late
Please step out, just walk the line
Rise from birth and die with time

Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe
Don't forget the everlasting cause!
Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe
Don't you pause and don't you breathe!

Pace of death - it's killing you
Pace of death is feeding me
With control you will let me in
With control we will die in sin

Doesn't it make sense to cure yourself
Doesn't it make sense to heal the world
Nothing is free and you will sacrifice yourself
A burden on you means a burden off the world

Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe
Don't forget the everlasting cause!
Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe
Don't you pause and don't you breathe!

Pause, breathe, pause, breathe, pause, breathe
Time to pause? I don't think so!

SOLO

Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe
Don't forget the everlasting cause!
Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe
Don't you pause and don't you breathe!

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This post has been edited by Kristofer Dahl: Nov 21 2008, 06:37 PM


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- Kristofer Dahl   Pause.breathe. - Kristofer Dahl   Nov 16 2008, 07:39 PM
- - Muris Varajic   Love the riffs and vocal line!! Perhaps ...   Nov 16 2008, 07:45 PM
|- - Kristofer Dahl   QUOTE (Muris Varajic @ Nov 16 2008, 09:45...   Nov 16 2008, 07:48 PM
|- - Muris Varajic   QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Nov 16 2008, 07:4...   Nov 16 2008, 07:52 PM
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|- - skennington   QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Nov 16 2008, 01:4...   Nov 16 2008, 07:55 PM
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- - Trond Vold   What a great track! Lyrics were excellent and...   Nov 16 2008, 07:47 PM
|- - Kristofer Dahl   QUOTE (Trond Vold @ Nov 16 2008, 09:47 PM...   Nov 16 2008, 07:49 PM
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- - Fran   Nice Kris, very thrashy/metallica, chorus is quite...   Nov 16 2008, 07:47 PM
- - Bogdan Radovic   Awesome tune Kris !! I love the chorus , i...   Nov 16 2008, 07:48 PM
- - Dejan Farkas   I think you managed to match lyrics with music, ve...   Nov 16 2008, 07:58 PM
- - Canis   Wow! This is kickass! Looking forward to ...   Nov 16 2008, 08:15 PM
- - Sentenced   I love your songs kris, and this reminds me also o...   Nov 16 2008, 08:22 PM
|- - Kristofer Dahl   QUOTE (Sentenced @ Nov 16 2008, 10:22 PM)...   Nov 16 2008, 08:48 PM
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- - Matt23   Cool song. I personally would have the guitar a b...   Nov 16 2008, 08:32 PM
- - Nazgul   Wow, great song! Though I think after liste...   Nov 16 2008, 08:40 PM
- - Kuba Szafran   Kicks asses ! You've got a characteristic ...   Nov 16 2008, 08:53 PM
- - Siggum   Love the track Kris... great energy and aggressivn...   Nov 16 2008, 09:17 PM
- - Emir Hot   cool song Kristofer. Nice vocal too   Nov 16 2008, 09:23 PM
- - Smells   speechless.... in a good way of course!! ...   Nov 16 2008, 09:58 PM
- - Kristofer Dahl   Hehe thanks so much guys! @ Smells - that wa...   Nov 16 2008, 10:02 PM
- - Trond Vold   Been listening through it a bit now and i noticed ...   Nov 17 2008, 03:45 AM
|- - Kristofer Dahl   QUOTE (Trond Vold @ Nov 17 2008, 05:45 AM...   Nov 17 2008, 09:49 AM
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- - Trond Vold   QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Nov 17 2008, 09:4...   Nov 17 2008, 01:37 PM
|- - Kristofer Dahl   QUOTE (Trond Vold @ Nov 17 2008, 03:37 PM...   Nov 17 2008, 04:26 PM
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- - Crazyfret   Great track Kris   Nov 17 2008, 01:45 PM
|- - Andrew Cockburn   Awesome! That was **** ** **** *** *** ! A...   Nov 17 2008, 02:29 PM
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- - David Wallimann   Man, that is killer!!! I think your vo...   Nov 17 2008, 04:34 PM
|- - Kristofer Dahl   QUOTE (David Wallimann @ Nov 17 2008, 06...   Nov 17 2008, 10:02 PM
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- - Pi38   Man, this is absolutely awesome. Way to go, Kris...   Nov 17 2008, 10:10 PM
- - Gus   Riff is killer. Definitely it does not sound like ...   Nov 18 2008, 12:02 AM
- - DeepRoots   Kris- i really love this tune.....this will be my ...   Nov 18 2008, 12:07 AM
- - MickeM   That was cool and fresh idea with the speed singin...   Nov 18 2008, 12:02 PM
- - Kristofer Dahl   Wow so many great comments - I am thrilled, thanks...   Nov 18 2008, 10:02 PM
- - skennington   Sounds better IMO Kris, not that it didn't sou...   Nov 18 2008, 10:18 PM
- - Canis   Sounds even more kickass I can't imagine how...   Nov 18 2008, 10:31 PM
- - Fran   Sounds much more powerful & bassy now, sound f...   Nov 18 2008, 10:58 PM
- - Kristofer Dahl   Well if you like it - thank yourselves! You ar...   Nov 18 2008, 11:01 PM
- - rokchik   I'm listening to the tweaked version and my do...   Nov 18 2008, 11:42 PM
- - ItsMe   Man, just listend to the song. Great riffing, cool...   Nov 19 2008, 12:07 AM
- - Chokehold   First i didn't like this, but i listened again...   Nov 19 2008, 08:51 PM
- - besip   whoaaaa so heavyyyyy stuff i'm like it   Nov 21 2008, 06:00 AM
- - Kristofer Dahl   Thanks a lot for digging this! I liked this s...   Nov 21 2008, 06:58 AM
- - MickeM   QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Nov 21 2008, 06:5...   Nov 21 2008, 09:19 AM
- - Kristofer Dahl   QUOTE (MickeM @ Nov 21 2008, 11:19 AM) Co...   Nov 21 2008, 09:25 AM
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