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Posted by: Matt23 Apr 13 2008, 03:22 PM

This is a sort of rock song I wrote last night after listening to "may tarde" (is that how you spell it) by cirse (great song). I can't sing well and don't have a good mic so i'v recorded my idea for the vocals as a lead guitar (its a bit dodgy cos i was sort of sight reading it when I recorded it). Cos i didn't really practice this much after i wrote it the playing isnt very good but i want to know what people think of the song.

Cheers

I've uploaded a 2nd recording of the song which i think is quite a lot better. Chorus leads still not too good but it's a lot better than it was.

rock_song.mp3 ( 2.38MB ) : 212

rock_song_2.mp3 ( 5.88MB ) : 234

Posted by: skipdaflip Apr 15 2008, 06:48 AM

Hey Matt,

I like song... put some time into it and built it out. It's not to me to say this... cause I somethimes got the same problem... you need to play the solo more flowing on the rest.
I've got some troubles with it somethimes... I really need to focus on that one. Perhaps If you'll fix that it will sound a lot better.

Great work Matt

Posted by: audiopaal Apr 15 2008, 07:26 AM

Hey man, this is really good
You should work on this one and get it finished, I think it can be a very good song

Posted by: Matt23 Apr 15 2008, 10:29 AM

Thanks for the feedback guys. I really agree with you on that cos the rhtyhm guitar part is quite easy but i never practiced it apart from recording it so it was a bit off. Problem with the vocal tune is i thought it would be easy to sight read but it wasn't, and so i just learnt it very quickly and played it badly.
I'll try recording it later today and see if i can get it a bit better.

Thanks

Posted by: Bondy Apr 15 2008, 11:56 AM

Matt dont sound bad at all could maybe use some my work on you fluidity but you should defo build on this well done

Posted by: Nemanja Filipovic Apr 15 2008, 08:22 PM

great song man..you should bend a string a little more,so it would give some dynamics to the melodic line..
great job man.......

Posted by: Hisham Al-Sanea Apr 15 2008, 11:28 PM

nice tracks man .keep going