===Incandescence===
It all contrives from the derived
Forecasted, an underlying problem
Putrid stench of the underdog
As it rots in the heat of the sun
We await the coming of purity
If ever it draws near
Corruption, the infamous parasite
Stays firmly implanted in the minds of many
Still the underdog waits,
For even in the heat of the sun
He cannot see the incandescence
Still the growth of a twisted entity
Grasp what is yours for the taking
Stare into the sun
And weep for its newfound incandescence
Do not seek a defense
Against the supposed savagery of men
There is no defense against the obscurities
Against those instigated to spontiniety
Do not let your beliefs become so convoluted
As to fight the invisible
Still the growth of a twisted entity
Grasp what is yours for the taking
Stare into the sun
And weep for its newfound incandescence
And so as we lift our heads
Up from the edge of our dusty grave
To douse ourselves in what could have been
The last grams of our life are consumed
Dissolved by the cells of corruption
And our eyes watch staring blankly
Into the dim sunlight - watching
The beacon of incandescence
Fade away
Into Tommorrow
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© Owen Waldron 2007
New one for tonight (I'm running out, promise! ), Crit away
I like this one alot, its well constructed and flows smoothly over your tongue.
Great job
The Uncreator said it all Really great Owen..I can see that you like to talk about problems that affect civilization, atleast your use of words points me to that direction xD
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