My New Song, breathe |
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Apr 27 2014, 02:05 PM
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Hi friends,
I finally found a bit of time to make some music today. I've been so busy in the Last few months that I hadn't found time to record until today. But anyway, I recorded this song I wrote called Breathe. Let me know what you think  Https://soundcloud.com/taka-perry/breathe There are a few lyrics here and there And I'll say, Breathe into my ear and hold me close, Time will fly by, Tell me stories of what you treasure most, I will listen, I don't want to grow old, No, not now, I have dreams, I want to share them with you, |
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Apr 27 2014, 09:57 PM
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Very nice song Taka.
It's the kind of pop i can listen in between my metal sessions  Sounds very good all the guitars |
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Apr 28 2014, 05:00 AM
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I found this one at facebook. Congrats friend! This song sounds very nice. I like the guitar work and the atmospheres created. It's cool that you decided to start experimenting with lyrics and your voice. Keep going!
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Apr 28 2014, 07:53 AM
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Very nice one Taka! I can hear a tad of a RHCP influence here! I like it very much!
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Apr 28 2014, 12:50 PM
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very good mate, I like that. great work with the vocals as well.
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Apr 29 2014, 08:05 AM
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Hehe! I knew it
 Well, regardless of any influence, I really like your tunes Taka - there's always something fresh about them! Keep up the good work mate! |
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Apr 30 2014, 04:28 PM
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I like the composition and arrangement Taka.
I do however think you need to take a careful look at the audio mix though. Gainstaging is an issue and in particular with the vsti drums as the cymbals sound rather harsh and at times distorted - it also sounds like there are some ISOs in the mix. Some of the vocals sound a little harsh as if you've over cooked the preamp a touch. For me the mix could be more spacious as at present it sounds rather narrow and also could do with more high end. Personally I'm not convinced by the choice of drum kit sample and the type of ambience around the 3' mark as it sounds odd in comparison with the other instruments and vocals. Intro and outro tails need looking at as they're not smooth and it sounds like some instruments/porcessors are kicking in/turning off. -------------------- Get your music professionally mastered by anl AES registered Mastering Engineer. Contact me for Audio Mastering Services and Advice and visit our website www.miromastering.com
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