Opinions Needed For Idea, Beginnings of a song
OzRob
Oct 26 2009, 06:41 AM
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This is a sketch, an idea to potentially become a full song, but I've played it so many times I can't separate from it anymore. Essentially it's a lament for the fall of Hector at the hand of Achilles.

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Dislikes?

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skennington
Oct 26 2009, 02:01 PM
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Hum, the link seems to just take me to Soundclicks homepage.. unsure.gif

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QUOTE (skennington @ Oct 26 2009, 01:01 PM) *
Hum, the link seems to just take me to Soundclicks homepage.. unsure.gif

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OzRob
Oct 26 2009, 02:12 PM
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If you right click the link, it will take you to the homepage. If you left click it should open the player in a new tab.

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skennington
Oct 26 2009, 02:38 PM
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R&L clicks give me the homepage.. sad.gif

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OzRob
Oct 26 2009, 11:16 PM
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Sorry guys, that's really weird. huh.gif

Try this: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songI...;songID=8266728

If that still doesn't work, I'll upload it here.

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OzRob
Oct 27 2009, 12:30 AM
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Okely, after great hassles, I have finally uploaded it here.... mellow.gif


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Ivan Milenkovic
Oct 27 2009, 11:15 PM
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Guitars are pretty good. Timing seems a bit acquard to me, did you record with metronome the guitars?
Also the drum is weak and generic sounding, but nothing that cannot be fixed.

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Trond Vold
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I think there's alot of good ideas in that sketch.
Like Ivan said, the timing is a bit off, and some melodies sound a bit random. It's like there's no glue to hold the different sections together.

I really liked the part with the clean guitars. I think it would be great If you finetuned the solos into more distinct melody-lines instead, if that makes sense smile.gif

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OzRob
Oct 28 2009, 03:24 AM
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I didn't use a metronome and the drums are crappy loops that came with my cheap DAW, but I've found some great percussion loops since.

I agree there's no real direction or anything yet. Just some loose ideas so far.

Thanks for the feedback guys. Taking it all onboard to work on. I have another project I've been busy with which I'll post soon. smile.gif


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