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Vulpine View Member Profile	Dec 11 2013, 09:08 AM
Dec 11 2013, 09:08 AM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	wanted to try some metal this time so hope you like https://soundcloud.com/vulpinetekneq/luna You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Gabriel Leopardi View Member Profile	Dec 12 2013, 01:48 AM
Dec 12 2013, 01:48 AM	Instructor Posts: 36.043 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina	Hi mate. This is a very interesting track. I find the first section, until 01:14 very fresh based on the songs that you usually compose. That parts needs more precision in timing to be more effective. Then the song becomes more melodic, I like the atmosphere, but I would go for even catchier melodies there. Just my opinion. It's a nice tune. Part 3 (starting at 02:14) is also cool, I think that the palm muted rhythm add something new and outstanding to the track. So well done, keep on composing nice music. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel

Vulpine View Member Profile	Dec 12 2013, 05:50 PM
Dec 12 2013, 05:50 PM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	Thanks , I also needed to adjust the volume of the drums on this track because listening to this tune in the car I found the drums were really soft lol should be fixed now http://markway16.bandcamp.com/album/6-a-m-ep You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Gabriel Leopardi View Member Profile	Dec 12 2013, 07:44 PM
Dec 12 2013, 07:44 PM	Instructor Posts: 36.043 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina	QUOTE (Vulpine @ Dec 12 2013, 01:50 PM) Thanks , I also needed to adjust the volume of the drums on this track because listening to this tune in the car I found the drums were really soft lol should be fixed now http://markway16.bandcamp.com/album/6-a-m-ep It sounds more balanced now. I can't really note the bass in the track. Did you record one? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel

Ben Higgins View Member Profile	Dec 12 2013, 08:53 PM
Dec 12 2013, 08:53 PM	Instructor Posts: 13.792 Joined: 11-March 10 From: England	Gab's managed to echo my own opinions It's got promise.. your ideas are always original, never cliche.. which is a really good thing. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Lessons My Youtube Channel My Band

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Dec 17 2013, 03:01 PM
Dec 17 2013, 03:01 PM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	That theme in the beginning got me hooked instantly! Great work mate as with all your compositions especially now that your rhythm is getting better! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Vulpine View Member Profile	Dec 18 2013, 06:12 PM
Dec 18 2013, 06:12 PM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	Hey I really appreciate the feedback from all you guys this was most likely my last song for this year = ) I want to try and do a demonstration/live version of this ... something I havent done in a while with any of my tunes so hopefully I may be able to do that by next week sometime You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Dec 19 2013, 09:07 AM
Dec 19 2013, 09:07 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	QUOTE (Vulpine @ Dec 18 2013, 05:12 PM) Hey I really appreciate the feedback from all you guys this was most likely my last song for this year = ) I want to try and do a demonstration/live version of this ... something I havent done in a while with any of my tunes so hopefully I may be able to do that by next week sometime Live versions would be great I remember the pleasant surprise that I had when I saw that video you posted with the improvisation over the Staind track. That was very, very good! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

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