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Saying Goodbyes

Ryan View Member Profile	Nov 21 2008, 08:37 PM
Nov 21 2008, 08:37 PM	GMC:er Posts: 1.286 Joined: 14-March 07 From: Hutchinson, Kansas, USA	This is my first song ive written before. So please bare with me Any advice is more than welcomed!!! Lay your arms down Its time to rise With broken hearts In disguise Memories that we shared There all so clear Ill never forget Why were here You broke me down You made me cry This time now You die inside So say your goodbyes Dont waste my time You left me before You returned to cry No more chances Those days have passed So now, say your goodbyes Remember how it was suppose to be Just you and me We were happy it seems But you let me suffer With a smile on your face You broke our promise What happened to them days All the time we spent together Sometimes i cared All our love blinded From hatred and fear This all means nothing now You wont understand I dont care anymore Throw your life down Just let me be Now, Im truely free So say your goodbyes Dont waste my time You left me before You returned to cry No more chances Those days have passed So now, say your goodbyes Take the pain Now its yours As days pass Gone forever Never to be You and me I died inside Reborn over time The days still pass The world still turns It wasnt easy Closing my eyes Letting go Passing you by Everday Everynight With all my heart I say to you Goodbye I love you So say your goodbyes Dont waste my time You left me before You returned to cry No more chances Those days have passed You were just to late Now I want to hear You saying goodbyes You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Ryan: Nov 21 2008, 09:00 PM -------------------- “Obey the principles without being bound by them.”

Eat-Sleep-andJam View Member Profile	Nov 21 2008, 11:05 PM
Nov 21 2008, 11:05 PM	GMC:er Posts: 2.412 Joined: 23-February 07 From: New york	That was good Ryan Little choppy here and there. ( Some poor word choices.) But the picture was quite clear. Very good first song Was this about a break up ? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Join Me On the Lyrics Board ! "Find something worth dying for... ...And live for it"-The Uncreator

Ryan View Member Profile	Nov 22 2008, 05:44 AM
Nov 22 2008, 05:44 AM	GMC:er Posts: 1.286 Joined: 14-March 07 From: Hutchinson, Kansas, USA	Thank you, Ill keep that in mind. And well it is about a break-up, but then again it isnt. Its more about after the break-up. I went through the depression stage, and tried to get her back. Threw myself at her yeah know. She just kinda blew me off with this excuse and that excuse. Then after I got over her through my persanol rehab (a.k.a. drinking, drugs, partying). I knew me and her were best just being friends. She caught drift of me having a new girl. She ran back to me crying wanting me back. So it pissed me off after all that time she comes back wanting me. And me just tellin her no its over. (its time for her to start saying her goodbyes) So then I wrote the song, just keeping all that in mind. Would you maybe enlighten me though on which words were of poor choice for future reference please? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- “Obey the principles without being bound by them.”

Vinod Saranga View Member Profile	Nov 22 2008, 06:11 AM
Nov 22 2008, 06:11 AM	Acoustic Instructor Posts: 1.279 Joined: 15-September 07 From: Colombo,Sri Lanka	I was little upset by the topic. Then I got to know it's a song. Great first song mate.When I read it all are imagined infront of my eyes You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Visit Sinhala Songs Chords

Ryan View Member Profile	Nov 23 2008, 06:58 AM
Nov 23 2008, 06:58 AM	GMC:er Posts: 1.286 Joined: 14-March 07 From: Hutchinson, Kansas, USA	QUOTE (Vinod Saranga @ Nov 21 2008, 11:11 PM) I was little upset by the topic. Then I got to know it's a song. Great first song mate.When I read it all are imagined infront of my eyes Thank you You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- “Obey the principles without being bound by them.”

Nemanja Filipovi... Nemanja Filipovic View Member Profile	Nov 23 2008, 10:50 AM
Nov 23 2008, 10:50 AM	Singing Instructor Posts: 3.391 Joined: 23-January 08	General impression is very good.I like the storry,and I like direct lyrics in general. p.s I stoped wrighting lyrics here,no reason,but for sure I am going to star know,so thanks for inspiration. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my video lessons and instructor board! Participate im my new Crazy Blues Collaboration

Ryan View Member Profile	Nov 26 2008, 02:44 AM
Nov 26 2008, 02:44 AM	GMC:er Posts: 1.286 Joined: 14-March 07 From: Hutchinson, Kansas, USA	QUOTE (Nemanja Filipovic @ Nov 23 2008, 03:50 AM) General impression is very good.I like the storry,and I like direct lyrics in general. p.s I stoped wrighting lyrics here,no reason,but for sure I am going to star know,so thanks for inspiration. Thank you, Nemanja. Good luck to you, Im gonna try and write more lyrics to post now to, after these good feedbacks. I was really surprised with my feedback. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- “Obey the principles without being bound by them.”

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