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Vulpine View Member Profile	May 9 2013, 06:43 PM
May 9 2013, 06:43 PM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	hey guys I gotta run so I cant stay and chat but this is my new song I composed hope you liked https://soundcloud.com/vulpinetekneq/what-more-do-you-want You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Jouve View Member Profile	May 9 2013, 07:22 PM
May 9 2013, 07:22 PM	Learning Roadie Posts: 282 Joined: 22-July 12 From: Russia	I like it, your sound is very good, and musical ideas are very stylish.I guess it's inspired by Satriani. But i think you should work a little bit on that song. You seem to be rhythmically uncertain in some places. Overall it's awesome You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Jouve: May 9 2013, 07:23 PM

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	May 10 2013, 08:46 AM
May 10 2013, 08:46 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Hey buddy! I can hear improvements on the timing and rhythm parts - very good. In the lead sections there are moments of rhythmic uncertainty, but this may come from two directions: - you were improvising and wasn't sure where to go next - you haven't practiced your composition enough before recording Which one is the right one? Cosmin You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Vulpine View Member Profile	May 10 2013, 10:13 AM
May 10 2013, 10:13 AM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ May 10 2013, 07:46 AM) Hey buddy! I can hear improvements on the timing and rhythm parts - very good. In the lead sections there are moments of rhythmic uncertainty, but this may come from two directions: - you were improvising and wasn't sure where to go next - you haven't practiced your composition enough before recording Which one is the right one? Cosmin Hey Cosmin I was improvising a solo and there was a lead line that was improvised that was influenced by some pedal tone licks that i've learned but as I was playing them I wasnt sure where to go This however can be fixed by doing a redo and listening to the rhythm section thats playing underneath and try to come up with a nice refreshing solo phrase to end that section of the lead = ) but Cosmin you and Jouve I want to say thanks for listening and posting feed You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	May 10 2013, 10:30 AM
May 10 2013, 10:30 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Well, you know what to do I am waiting for the final result, ok? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Gabriel Leopardi View Member Profile	May 10 2013, 02:14 PM
May 10 2013, 02:14 PM	Instructor Posts: 36.043 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina	Hey Vulpine! I enjoyed listening to this song as always. It's a good composition, I like the progression and the different moments. I think that you have to define rhythms to make the timing more precise. That's the only improvement that I would do to this one. Keep on rocking. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel

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