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Patrik Berg View Member Profile	Nov 16 2012, 01:18 AM
Nov 16 2012, 01:18 AM	GMC:er Posts: 497 Joined: 5-December 11 From: Australia	Hey everyone, looking for advice, criticism etc on my home recording, 207bpm was probably a bit ambitious but I had a go anyway tell me if you like it or if you think it's crap, I'm open to any advise You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Attached File(s) something_heavy.mp3 ( 3.49MB ) Number of downloads: 390 -------------------- When your fingers bleed you're getting somewhere

Ben Higgins View Member Profile	Nov 16 2012, 11:02 AM
Nov 16 2012, 11:02 AM	Instructor Posts: 13.792 Joined: 11-March 10 From: England	Well it's obviously NOT crap, Patrik.. in fact it's quite the opposite ! I hear some lovely shuffling Iced Earth sections mashing it up with Testament.. it all sounds great - no criticisms here. You might want to go over it again and tighten up some rhythm tracks here and there but I like the arrangement and everything You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Lessons My Youtube Channel My Band

Patrik Berg View Member Profile	Nov 16 2012, 04:27 PM
Nov 16 2012, 04:27 PM	GMC:er Posts: 497 Joined: 5-December 11 From: Australia	Thanks Ben, yes I will do another take at a slower tempo change, maybe 196bpm, just to make the rhythm tighter and the solo. I appreciate your feedback. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- When your fingers bleed you're getting somewhere

VilleFIN View Member Profile	Nov 16 2012, 05:26 PM
Nov 16 2012, 05:26 PM	Tone Seeker Posts: 1.430 Joined: 10-March 08 From: Finland	Oh this is great ! I like your overall tone and sound here. Composition is also great. If you ever want to team up and make riffs/songs PM me You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My SoundCloud My Youtube videos My Facebook page

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Nov 16 2012, 06:26 PM
Nov 16 2012, 06:26 PM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	I love the intro part! Great atmosphere! The rest sounds very good as well, even though it's not my type of metal But anyway, Ben's words about the timing should help get this whole track at 100 % awesomeness Cosmin You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Patrik Berg View Member Profile	Nov 17 2012, 09:12 AM
Nov 17 2012, 09:12 AM	GMC:er Posts: 497 Joined: 5-December 11 From: Australia	Hey WeePee that would be cool, thanks Cosmin You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- When your fingers bleed you're getting somewhere

DeGroot View Member Profile	Nov 17 2012, 09:30 AM
Nov 17 2012, 09:30 AM	Experienced Guitar Hero Posts: 1.511 Joined: 16-January 12 From: Chicago, Illinois	Damn this is really good. I agree with the Iced Earth meets Testament riffing vibe. You should definitely keep at this one! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by DeGroot: Nov 17 2012, 09:31 AM --------------------

Grace View Member Profile	Nov 17 2012, 09:44 AM
Nov 17 2012, 09:44 AM	GMC:er Posts: 316 Joined: 24-July 12 From: Florida USA	You have impressed me....I didn't know what I was going to listen to but I couldn't stop it! I really enjoyed it a lot I love your style. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- BRUUUUUTAL GRIM DEATH NINJA OF THE FROZEN NORTH!!!!

Alex Feather View Member Profile	Nov 17 2012, 11:20 AM
Nov 17 2012, 11:20 AM	Instructor Posts: 4.332 Joined: 21-November 11 From: Los Angeles	It is not crap! I liked it a lot! Very nice heavy riffs! I also loved the drums! What program did you use? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Visit my website Like me on Facebook Subscribe to my YouTube Follow me on Twitter

Patrik Berg View Member Profile	Nov 17 2012, 01:11 PM
Nov 17 2012, 01:11 PM	GMC:er Posts: 497 Joined: 5-December 11 From: Australia	Wow, thanks guys, the drums are EZdrummer done on garage band, guitar is a Mesa boogie studio 22+ miced with an AKG CCS something or other You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- When your fingers bleed you're getting somewhere

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Nov 17 2012, 02:25 PM
Nov 17 2012, 02:25 PM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	QUOTE (Patrik Berg @ Nov 17 2012, 12:11 PM) Wow, thanks guys, the drums are EZdrummer done on garage band, guitar is a Mesa boogie studio 22+ miced with an AKG CCS something or other Mesa is the thing for metal, ain't it? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

mad View Member Profile	Nov 18 2012, 12:18 AM
Nov 18 2012, 12:18 AM	Accomplished Rock Star Posts: 692 Joined: 27-December 10 From: Germany	I like it a lot! Catchy riffs, nice solo(s) and the drums are killer - Good work! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Patrik Berg View Member Profile	Nov 18 2012, 08:40 AM
Nov 18 2012, 08:40 AM	GMC:er Posts: 497 Joined: 5-December 11 From: Australia	Thanks Grace, thanks Mad, yeah Mesa has a nicely compressed sound for tight palm mutes You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- When your fingers bleed you're getting somewhere

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Nov 18 2012, 02:30 PM
Nov 18 2012, 02:30 PM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	QUOTE (Patrik Berg @ Nov 18 2012, 07:40 AM) Thanks Grace, thanks Mad, yeah Mesa has a nicely compressed sound for tight palm mutes Indeed and also large open riffing - I love the hugeness it provided on our recordings for the Days of Confusion - 'Seeds' EP! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Patrik Berg View Member Profile	Nov 18 2012, 10:25 PM
Nov 18 2012, 10:25 PM	GMC:er Posts: 497 Joined: 5-December 11 From: Australia	QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Nov 18 2012, 01:30 PM) Indeed and also large open riffing - I love the hugeness it provided on our recordings for the Days of Confusion - 'Seeds' EP! Which Mesa do you use Cosmin? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- When your fingers bleed you're getting somewhere

Ben Higgins View Member Profile	Nov 19 2012, 10:04 AM
Nov 19 2012, 10:04 AM	Instructor Posts: 13.792 Joined: 11-March 10 From: England	QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Nov 17 2012, 01:25 PM) Mesa is the thing for metal, ain't it? I still haven't played one yet !! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Lessons My Youtube Channel My Band

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Nov 19 2012, 10:08 AM
Nov 19 2012, 10:08 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	QUOTE (Patrik Berg @ Nov 18 2012, 09:25 PM) Which Mesa do you use Cosmin? We used a Road King head! It belongs to my band mate - Cezar, the one with the Gibson Les Paul You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Ben Higgins View Member Profile	Nov 19 2012, 10:19 AM
Nov 19 2012, 10:19 AM	Instructor Posts: 13.792 Joined: 11-March 10 From: England	QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Nov 19 2012, 09:08 AM) We used a Road King head! It belongs to my band mate - Cezar, the one with the Gibson Les Paul I have to ask this but... Have you ever said 'Hail Cezar !' to him ??? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Lessons My Youtube Channel My Band

Patrik Berg View Member Profile	Nov 19 2012, 10:58 AM
Nov 19 2012, 10:58 AM	GMC:er Posts: 497 Joined: 5-December 11 From: Australia	QUOTE (Ben Higgins @ Nov 19 2012, 09:19 AM) I have to ask this but... Have you ever said 'Hail Cezar !' to him ??? QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Nov 19 2012, 09:08 AM) We used a Road King head! It belongs to my band mate - Cezar, the one with the Gibson Les Paul I'd love to play through a Road King, so many combinations available for tone You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- When your fingers bleed you're getting somewhere

Todd Simpson View Member Profile	Nov 21 2012, 01:59 AM
Nov 21 2012, 01:59 AM	GMC:er Posts: 25.297 Joined: 23-December 09 From: Atlanta, Georgia, USA	Dude this sounds KILLER! I can't believe you are almost bagging on it? Walk us through your production process a bit. Software/hardware/recording? Playing is really good and tight, guitar tone is good too and the Bass sounds good which is really rare it seems when guitar players are recording. Put a vocal track on it and this is ready to be released. Todd QUOTE (Patrik Berg @ Nov 15 2012, 07:18 PM) Hey everyone, looking for advice, criticism etc on my home recording, 207bpm was probably a bit ambitious but I had a go anyway tell me if you like it or if you think it's crap, I'm open to any advise You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- EVERY QUICK LICK! http://bit.ly/quicklickswithtodd MY INSTRUCTOR FORUM MY SHRED JOURNEY (BOOTCAMP) LESSON NOTES/TABS MY INSTRUCTOR PROFILE @ GMC ME @ YOUTUBE.com ME @ Instagram.com ME @ TWITTER

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