Pure Steel - Metal Collab - Joe Kataldo, FINAL MIX & COMMENTS! |
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Pure Steel - Metal Collab - Joe Kataldo, FINAL MIX & COMMENTS! |
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Dec 30 2008, 05:12 PM |
Hi Guys Thanks For Join My First Collabs, you all made a great job
TrackList: 1] Matt23 2]Outlaw2112 3]berko 4]superize 5]Tolek 6]Caelumamittendum 7]Toroso 8]leedbreak 9]Tjchep 10]kaznie_NL 11]Marc_Maiden 12]Dexxter 13]ztevie 14]Oxac 15]kjutte 16]enforcer In the end you will find my take at 05:09 Hi guys, sorry for the delay on comments but...even GMC Instructors are on holidays I've tried to highlight what you have done good and maybe give you some suggestion/direction to improve, but bear in mind that to be more precise I should have know your age, how long do you played and stuff like that, so...in the ends they just represent my point of view based on recording Joe_Kataldo___Pure_Steel___Metal_Collabs.mp3 ( 5.2MB ) Number of downloads: 426 Matt23 Really nothing to say here, great solo great intro and flawless playing...Good Job Matt! Bending intonation it's good but you can improve it, same for the vibrato, spend some time with tuner for bending and a metronome for vibrato Outlaw2112 Great intro but you get lost in the middle, ideas are good, but played, sometime, with wrong timing. Try to tap your foot when play or record along with the baking track, and alway practice with a metronome. berko Same problem here good ideas, that could be great, with just a little more precise timing, picking lines are beautiful but in some parts loose their tightness because of timing. one word...metronome superize Great use of the phrigian mode in the begin, good modal solo in the complex maybe you over used that ascending/descending picking line too much, it's important to keep the listener interested Tolek Nice opening blues/rock lick and tapping, I like the open string part too, I have just one suggestion, try to use less distortion Caelumamittendum A dark tone as I like really nothing to say here, a good mix of melody and shred with wide vibrato, and killing sweeps in the end...good job. Toroso Same problem as some other guys, you have very good melodic ideas, that not express their full potential because of wrong timing...try to work more with metronome and always tap your foot along with backing tracks or live bands leedbreak a very good structured solo, with repetitions and variation to keep the listener interested, the only suggestion I can give is try to work more on tone, specially when recording less distortion means more dynamics Tjchep Here it comes my favourite I love the epic intro the dark tone and the opening vibrato gives me goose bumps, only suggestion is work more on bending intonation not 100% precise but nearly there P.S. I got inspired from you form my solo kaznie_NL A nice structured solo with call&answer phrases with surely an uncommon and unique tone, try to work more on timing Marc_Maiden What could I say nice harmony, riffs, and some fusion rhythmic displacement too all played with a good tone and conviction...try to mix the guitar a little bit lower, to better fit in the mix Dexxter a nice solo, enough structured to give to the listener the impression that you know where are you going, good vibrato, picking technique and bending that sometime not 100% in tune but nearly there. Unfortunately the audio quality was quite low and doesn't pay justice to you solo, maybe try to improve this ztevie Nice solo here too, with a structure important to keep the listener interested, very good picking techniques , I may suggest to experiment with more mids on your amp setting, but this is purely a matter of personal taste Oxac Interesting pickup intro very fluid, unfortunately got a little bit lost in the final mix because of preceding solo. Ideas are good but lack of organization, and needs a more structured form, otherwise sometime may looks like you don't know what you are doing, work on blues soloing may help kjutte Majestic intro, great use of phrigian/phrigian dominat modes, good picking technique and vibrato, good control of harmonics too...probably you improvised it, but if you spend some time organizing better the ideas and give it a more structured form it could be a perfect solo for a metal song enforcer Impressive picking techniques and articulation, ideas are good and interesting specially the final harmony part...two things: try to work more on bending intonation and that second part at 00:13 comes in, too much disconnected from the first one, if you used overdubs, do not cut the tail of the first solo Thanks For Joining Joe Kataldo This post has been edited by Joe Kataldo: Jan 1 2009, 02:49 PM -------------------- ________________________________________________________________________________ |
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