Goodbye - Latest Single |
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Apr 15 2016, 10:19 PM
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Hello guys!
So it's finally finished  Goodbye - dedicated to all the souls who have attempted suicide but unfortunately did not survive to share their story  https://soundcloud.com/stortzmusic/goodbye Link for a free mp3 download will be available in a few days after some finishing touches for anyone interested  Lyrics: Have you ever been so trapped Lost inside your head With a stomach full of a pills And a gun beside the bed They say the "good book" has the answers That you seek desperately But your prayers have gone unanswered Where can those answers be? 'Cause the days are growing longer And the walls are closing in The only comfort you can find Is in a glass of Jameson I'm afraid the time has finally come To commit this mortal sin Life can be cruel sometimes Though I guess it's always been You can't have a rainbow Without a little rain But there aren't enough colors To cover up the pain Your heart is but an empty shell Its walls painted black As your feet dangle over the edge There is no turning back So you try Spread your wings and fly So high you close your eyes And tell the world goodbye There's nothing left to try Not a single tear left to cry So you fly And tell the world Goodbye This post has been edited by Chris S.: Apr 15 2016, 10:30 PM |
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Apr 16 2016, 11:18 AM
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Heavy stuff. Really good though, sounds excellent. well done, chris.
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Apr 16 2016, 11:39 AM
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That was dark! But really good! Well done!
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Apr 16 2016, 01:17 PM
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i like it !!
Laurent --------------------    |
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Apr 16 2016, 07:05 PM
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Very well done!!! Great track
Who is the vocalist? Is she from that place that does talent for hire?
This post has been edited by Todd Simpson: Apr 16 2016, 07:06 PM |
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Apr 16 2016, 07:19 PM
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That's brilliant, very dark. I can imagine it on an album like The Wall.
Well done mate
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Apr 16 2016, 08:57 PM
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QUOTE (Phil66 @ Apr 16 2016, 06:19 PM)  That's brilliant, very dark. I can imagine it on an album like The Wall. Well done mate Thanks Phil, means a lot
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Well done!|
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Apr 18 2016, 05:30 AM
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Thats absolutely awesome epic stuff.... Brilliant!!!!
This geniuses vocalist should sing for the nightwitch collab... that would be epic!!! (I hope Darius read this)  |
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Apr 18 2016, 11:35 AM
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Wow Chris!!
I really liked this, very powerful! -------------------- I'd rather have a full Bottle in front of me than a full Frontal Lobotomy!!
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Apr 18 2016, 02:05 PM
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I liked it, although (and not a critisism, more of where my ear was leading me) I was hoping the chord sequence was going to progress from Am - Em to F - G for a little variation and to lead the song somewhere else.
Again more a personal preference of what I would have done (not that you asked  ).Still it's very powerful as it is and boy she has a pair of lungs on her!!! -------------------- My SoundCloud
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Apr 18 2016, 07:31 PM
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Congrats!! You mentioned it's a single? Did you complete an album to go with it?
Todd |
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