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Stevie-Ray-Vaugh... Stevie-Ray-Vaughn View Member Profile	Jan 21 2008, 10:42 PM
Jan 21 2008, 10:42 PM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 1.119 Joined: 23-December 06 From: Canada!	====Un-named==== You're the only thing on my mind I've got a life that I can't find Too many hits for the team Reality is slipping to dream I lift my head, and look to the sky To see everything that's passing me by Loose change falling, hitting the ground Shattering this unreal sound (Chorus) It's hard to win the battle When the fight can't be won I'ts just another man Another life under the sun Too many victims One murderer You have to be the one The one to find the cure Water drags him as he reaches for shore Pulling him under, he cries for more Drifting farther, farther from home His body releases an emotional storm Lying here lifeless, the ground starts to sink His body gives up, but his mind starts to think About what he once sought, fortune and fame But he sees what he's lost, and how little he's gained © Ryley Gartshore 2008 ========================= This is basically an anti-drug song i started a while back and finished last night. It's not perfect, but I thought I'd share it with GMC to see what you think. Well, how'd I do? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- But still I want answers, what's the point, what does all this mean?

The Uncreator View Member Profile	Jan 21 2008, 10:52 PM
Jan 21 2008, 10:52 PM	Fire Up The Blades, Moderator Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida	QUOTE But he sees what he's lost, and how little he's gained Great line, i think that really hits hard, And sums up the song perfectly. Great lyrics too You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Stevie-Ray-Vaugh... Stevie-Ray-Vaughn View Member Profile	Jan 21 2008, 10:55 PM
Jan 21 2008, 10:55 PM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 1.119 Joined: 23-December 06 From: Canada!	QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Jan 21 2008, 09:52 PM) Great line, i think that really hits hard, And sums up the song perfectly. Great lyrics too Well Thank you Anyone got an idea for a song title? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Stevie·Ray·Vaughn: Jan 21 2008, 10:56 PM -------------------- But still I want answers, what's the point, what does all this mean?

Hisham Al-Sanea View Member Profile	Jan 22 2008, 12:16 AM
Jan 22 2008, 12:16 AM	Instructor Posts: 4.085 Joined: 19-October 07 From: middle east / lebanon	nice song and i think you have the title for this song (You're the only thing on my mind) would be nice title You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- email me *my video lessons* *instructor board*

Chris Evans View Member Profile	Jan 22 2008, 12:23 AM
Jan 22 2008, 12:23 AM	Learning Tone Guru - Community Coordinator & Moderator Posts: 6.319 Joined: 24-September 07 From: Sittingbourne, UK	Nice lyrics mate hmmm a title .. I`m afraid I usually always go for the soft option for titles on my songs and usually just pick out a line of the song, generally out of the chorus, if I had to choose one out of this chorus it would be ...... You have to be the one You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Show us what part of the world you live in and get yourself ON THE GMC:er Location MAP

Stevie-Ray-Vaugh... Stevie-Ray-Vaughn View Member Profile	Jan 22 2008, 12:43 AM
Jan 22 2008, 12:43 AM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 1.119 Joined: 23-December 06 From: Canada!	Some possible titles im considering are : You Have To Be The One (Thanks Smells) Another Life (Under The Sun) Impossible Fights The Only One Life Without You Which one of these do you feel is the strongest? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- But still I want answers, what's the point, what does all this mean?

Chris Evans View Member Profile	Jan 22 2008, 12:58 AM
Jan 22 2008, 12:58 AM	Learning Tone Guru - Community Coordinator & Moderator Posts: 6.319 Joined: 24-September 07 From: Sittingbourne, UK	QUOTE (Stevie·Ray·Vaughn @ Jan 21 2008, 11:43 PM) Some possible titles im considering are : You Have To Be The One (Thanks Smells) Another Life (Under The Sun) Impossible Fights The Only One Life Without You Which one of these do you feel is the strongest? ooh you`ve made it tough lol! my lyrics are so bad and repeat so many times that its easy to pick a main "theme" for a title .. .hmmmm Dont know, quite like "Another Life (Under the Sun) also, cant decide, which one do you like best? which one is leaping at you more than the others? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Smells: Jan 22 2008, 12:59 AM -------------------- Show us what part of the world you live in and get yourself ON THE GMC:er Location MAP

Stevie-Ray-Vaugh... Stevie-Ray-Vaughn View Member Profile	Jan 22 2008, 01:01 AM
Jan 22 2008, 01:01 AM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 1.119 Joined: 23-December 06 From: Canada!	QUOTE (Smells @ Jan 21 2008, 11:58 PM) ooh you`ve made it tough lol! my lyrics are so bad and repeat so many times that its easy to pick a main "theme" for a title .. .hmmmm Dont know, quite like "Another Life (Under the Sun) also, cant decide, which one do you like best? which one is leaping at you more than the others? Haha i quite like Another Life (Under The Sun) and Life Without You .. but i don't know how to decide Im sort of leaning toards Another Life (Under The Sun) though. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- But still I want answers, what's the point, what does all this mean?

Chris Evans View Member Profile	Jan 22 2008, 01:02 AM
Jan 22 2008, 01:02 AM	Learning Tone Guru - Community Coordinator & Moderator Posts: 6.319 Joined: 24-September 07 From: Sittingbourne, UK	If thats what your leaning towards then thats gotta be it You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Show us what part of the world you live in and get yourself ON THE GMC:er Location MAP

Stevie-Ray-Vaugh... Stevie-Ray-Vaughn View Member Profile	Jan 22 2008, 01:07 AM
Jan 22 2008, 01:07 AM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 1.119 Joined: 23-December 06 From: Canada!	Haha and so it is You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- But still I want answers, what's the point, what does all this mean?

Chris Evans View Member Profile	Jan 22 2008, 01:16 AM
Jan 22 2008, 01:16 AM	Learning Tone Guru - Community Coordinator & Moderator Posts: 6.319 Joined: 24-September 07 From: Sittingbourne, UK	QUOTE (Stevie·Ray·Vaughn @ Jan 22 2008, 12:07 AM) Haha and so it is ta da, yay, congratz You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Show us what part of the world you live in and get yourself ON THE GMC:er Location MAP

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