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Aug 7 2008, 09:29 PM |
Hey all. Thought I'd share this improvisation I did over the same backing as TJchep.
Critique, please! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_YJgiUvZoGg |
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Aug 7 2008, 09:51 PM |
It is a great take. Great tone, great phrasing
All just Great Hopefully i can play like that some day -------------------- My Gear
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Aug 7 2008, 09:52 PM |
It is a great take. Great tone, great phrasing All just Great Hopefully i can play like that some day Thank you very much. And I'm sure you're not that far off. |
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Aug 7 2008, 09:54 PM |
Thank you very much. And I'm sure you're not that far off. Trus me i am far far away from that -------------------- My Gear
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Aug 7 2008, 10:11 PM
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One thing that you do need to improve on, is your structure. You have some great licks in there, but not many of them really tie together, and tell a Story.
But check this out. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kI8cerldZRk Some good advice. This post has been edited by Tjchep: Aug 7 2008, 10:12 PM |
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Aug 7 2008, 10:17 PM |
One thing that you do need to improve on, is your structure. You have some great licks in there, but not many of them really tie together, and tell a Story. But check this out. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kI8cerldZRk Some good advice. Yes, I know. I think that is mainly a mental process... to some extent. It's the critique I always get. I just need to figure out a way to work on this that fits me. Thanks for the comment, by the way. This post has been edited by Caelumamittendum: Aug 7 2008, 10:17 PM |
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Aug 7 2008, 10:18 PM
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Thats dave the weiner dude....
His rotw series is packed full of info. -------------------- If we aren't supposed to eat animals, why are they made out of meat ?
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Aug 7 2008, 10:21 PM |
I like the points of "story telling". I've thought of that every once in a while, but while playing I always seem to forget about it!
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Aug 7 2008, 10:25 PM
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It is a mental proccess I guess.. But I mean.. I'm telling you if you got that down, you'd sound like.. 10 times better than you already do!!
Just food for thought. |
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Aug 7 2008, 10:29 PM |
I really like your playing dude. I think you have great potential!
Oh, and I subscribed to your youtube channel btw! This post has been edited by Toni Suominen: Aug 7 2008, 10:30 PM -------------------- Gear:
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Aug 7 2008, 10:30 PM |
that was good. Idk how any 1 can play without inlays, that must take sum serious skill.
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Aug 7 2008, 10:37 PM |
I'll tell you the secret: But I would like to have those gone too actually. I think it really helps you learn about the fretboard haha funny -------------------- |
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Aug 7 2008, 10:41 PM | ||
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Aug 8 2008, 01:00 AM |
hey man, that sounds very good actually, nice phrasing as well.
Tone is little buzzy, but you're getting close to a smoother tone as I can hear. WIth vibrato you're on the right track, just keep practicing it and it will be great. You have a great sense for rhythm and that really pushes this solo further. Lack of structure is obvious and this is because you don't know where notes are on the fretboard - don't know how they sound. I see that you try to go to strong notes at several points in the solo and often anticipate them, but you need a good background knowledge of where these strong notes are. Just keep rockin man, very good solo. -------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE
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