911! We Have A Jumper !
Eat-Sleep-andJam
Nov 27 2008, 01:27 AM
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Attracted to something,
The soft ringing of that phone.
With a voice that always answers,
So I'll never be alone.

Feeling that breeze.
That gentle stroke from the wind,
Looking down at the pavement,
I see my own grave flash before my eyes.

Something keeps pulling me in,
Magnetic in its own way.
So I'll Jump,

Theres just no way,
Theres just no way

That I want to stay.
In this world anymore.

The cement starts laughing,
Saying "Whats taking you so long?"
When the estrogen from the phone says,
"Dont do it , Stay Strong."

I hang up that phone,
Slide it right into my pocket,
Put away this notepad

And...







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Nov 27 2008, 01:56 AM
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When the estrogen from the phone says,
"Dont do it , Stay Strong."


Quite a unique way of phrasing that particular line, Cool stuff man. Its different from your other stuff, Its short, to the point, And has some sardonic humor I wouldnt expect from you. Id offer improvements, But it sounds good that way it is.






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Eat-Sleep-andJam
Nov 28 2008, 04:54 AM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Nov 26 2008, 04:56 PM) *
Quite a unique way of phrasing that particular line, Cool stuff man. Its different from your other stuff, Its short, to the point, And has some sardonic humor I wouldnt expect from you. Id offer improvements, But it sounds good that way it is.


Thanks. I like venturing into different styles ph34r.gif

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