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JOhn View Member Profile	Sep 15 2007, 05:25 PM
Sep 15 2007, 05:25 PM	GMC:er Posts: 296 Joined: 28-May 07	Heres a video i made for the vai comp, i played it a bit bad but i took it about 10 times and decided i had had enough Any comment are welcome and vote for me http://www.lickspace.com/Video/PlayVideo.a...6%2boMJ52an0%3d edit: ^^^^ i deleted that one because every said it was bad here is my new one http://www.lickspace.com/Video/PlayVideo.a...&Voted=True You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by JOhn: Sep 16 2007, 09:23 AM -------------------- The only man it's OK to love is Paul Gilbert.

Iluha View Member Profile	Sep 15 2007, 05:39 PM
Sep 15 2007, 05:39 PM	GMC:er Posts: 1.737 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Karmiel, Israel	The guitar sounded a bit offtune... you had some nice ideas in there, maybe if you give it a few more takes. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Latest Upload: Here! My Practice Agenda/Blog: Here!

visi0n View Member Profile	Sep 15 2007, 07:50 PM
Sep 15 2007, 07:50 PM	Learning Tone Seeker Posts: 571 Joined: 12-September 07 From: The Netherlands	Try to give more vibrato and with more feeling .. i believe the next one you record will be much better You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! --------------------

Robin View Member Profile	Sep 15 2007, 08:59 PM
Sep 15 2007, 08:59 PM	GMC:er Posts: 2.483 Joined: 9-January 07 From: Alta, Norway	I really like the chord progression. Melodic-wise I think it was really good But, it sounds like your guitar is out of tune and/or your missing some notes. Your vibratos, bends and timing need alot of work. All this will come with years of practicing. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Robin Myspace - Creep Colony Myspace - Creep Colony - Paralyzed

Muris Varajic View Member Profile	Sep 15 2007, 11:47 PM
Sep 15 2007, 11:47 PM	Instructor Posts: 15.459 Joined: 22-June 07 From: Sarajevo,Bosnia	Must work a bit on it but I gave you 10 tho! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by muris: Sep 16 2007, 12:16 AM -------------------- Youtube MySpace Website Album "Let It Out" on iTunes and CD Baby Check out my video lessons and instructor board! The Pianist tune is progress,check it out! "ok.. it is great.. :P have you myspace? Can i to personalize this for you guy?"

KRmachine View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 12:12 AM
Sep 16 2007, 12:12 AM	GMC:er Posts: 160 Joined: 4-February 06 From: Sweden	Try to locate where the beat in the song is, and place an accentuated note there, I couldn't really feel any pulse or rythm in this. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Ryan View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 01:13 AM
Sep 16 2007, 01:13 AM	GMC:er Posts: 1.286 Joined: 14-March 07 From: Hutchinson, Kansas, USA	This is alot better than this one dude i seen who was supposdly a popluar guitar player there. He was the crappiest. I didnt feel nothin realy like the guy above me. But your doing way better than this dude that thinks he can shred. Out of timing, terrible techinque, no rythem, no backing, no nothing. He was bad. So you still got a decent chance man! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- “Obey the principles without being bound by them.”

JOhn View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 07:24 AM
Sep 16 2007, 07:24 AM	GMC:er Posts: 296 Joined: 28-May 07	iv pretty much deducted that it sucked but i wrote a new one and totally scrapped the old one ill put it up soon. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- The only man it's OK to love is Paul Gilbert.

Zephyr View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 07:49 AM
Sep 16 2007, 07:49 AM	GMC:er Posts: 535 Joined: 23-August 07	You also might want to work on your bends a little, make sure that you bend all the way to the correct note. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

JOhn View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 09:21 AM
Sep 16 2007, 09:21 AM	GMC:er Posts: 296 Joined: 28-May 07	Here is my new one http://www.lickspace.com/Video/PlayVideo.a...&Voted=True You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- The only man it's OK to love is Paul Gilbert.

fkalich View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 09:39 AM
Sep 16 2007, 09:39 AM	GMC:er Posts: 2.789 Joined: 12-February 07 From: People's Republic of Lawrence Kansas	You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Iluha View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 01:40 PM
Sep 16 2007, 01:40 PM	GMC:er Posts: 1.737 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Karmiel, Israel	This time you'r more in tune, but I think the idea is too simple for that spesific competition. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Latest Upload: Here! My Practice Agenda/Blog: Here!

JOhn View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 02:10 PM
Sep 16 2007, 02:10 PM	GMC:er Posts: 296 Joined: 28-May 07	i made it simple on purpose. if you look at muris's video it is very complex at cool i could never match that with less than a year of playing so i decided to do something different. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- The only man it's OK to love is Paul Gilbert.

Iluha View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 02:38 PM
Sep 16 2007, 02:38 PM	GMC:er Posts: 1.737 Joined: 14-April 07 From: Karmiel, Israel	QUOTE (JOhn @ Sep 16 2007, 03:10 PM) i made it simple on purpose. if you look at muris's video it is very complex at cool i could never match that with less than a year of playing so i decided to do something different. Well for only under a year of playing, to come up with anything is impressive enough, I could hardly improvise after one year, so props to that You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Latest Upload: Here! My Practice Agenda/Blog: Here!

fkalich View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 03:45 PM
Sep 16 2007, 03:45 PM	GMC:er Posts: 2.789 Joined: 12-February 07 From: People's Republic of Lawrence Kansas	QUOTE (JOhn @ Sep 16 2007, 08:10 AM) i made it simple on purpose. if you look at muris's video it is very complex at cool i could never match that with less than a year of playing so i decided to do something different. You need to work on getting the Vai look about you, you know, the self-centered pretentious egotistical look. Try raising your arms in the air, and looking about you, as if you feel everyone around you should prostrate themselves on the ground, like 19th century pigtailed coolie laborers would around the Emperor. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

JOhn View Member Profile	Sep 16 2007, 04:35 PM
Sep 16 2007, 04:35 PM	GMC:er Posts: 296 Joined: 28-May 07	QUOTE (fkalich @ Sep 17 2007, 12:45 AM) You need to work on getting the Vai look about you, you know, the self-centered pretentious egotistical look. Try raising your arms in the air, and looking about you, as if you feel everyone around you should prostrate themselves on the ground, like 19th century pigtailed coolie laborers would around the Emperor. ha ha ha that actually gave me a great idea You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- The only man it's OK to love is Paul Gilbert.

MickeM View Member Profile	Sep 17 2007, 02:28 AM
Sep 17 2007, 02:28 AM	Born of NWOBHM, Moderation Team Leader Posts: 8.562 Joined: 9-January 07 From: Stockholm, Sweden	QUOTE (JOhn @ Sep 16 2007, 10:21 AM) Here is my new one http://www.lickspace.com/Video/PlayVideo.a...&Voted=True It's all good but the timing, I notice your timing got better and better for each video posted but it's still off a bit. That comes with practice, try rehearsing it a few times more before you post it, it should feel so safe when you play it so you don't have to struggle one bit. I tried to vote but it says "you already voted", but I havn't. Could it be because the link already says "Vote=True"? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My bands homepage All time favourites: B. Streisand - Woman in Love, M. Hopkin - Those were the days, L. Richie - Hello

Andrew Cockburn View Member Profile	Sep 17 2007, 03:21 AM
Sep 17 2007, 03:21 AM	Moderation Policy Director Posts: 10.459 Joined: 6-February 07 From: CT, USA	QUOTE (fkalich @ Sep 16 2007, 04:39 AM) That's the spirit You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my Instructor profile Live long and prosper ... My Stuff: Electric Guitars : Ibanez Jem7v, Line6 Variax 700, Fender Plus Strat with 57/62 Pickups, Line6 Variax 705 Bass Acoustic Guitars : Taylor 816ce, Martin D-15, Line6 Variax Acoustic 300 Nylon Effects : Line6 Helix, Keeley Modded Boss DS1, Keeley Modded Boss BD2, Keeley 4 knob compressor, Keeley OxBlood Amps : Epiphone Valve Jnr & Head, Cockburn A.C.1, Cockburn A.C.2, Blackstar Club 50 Head & 4x12 Cab

JOhn View Member Profile	Sep 17 2007, 04:12 PM
Sep 17 2007, 04:12 PM	GMC:er Posts: 296 Joined: 28-May 07	QUOTE (MickeM @ Sep 17 2007, 11:28 AM) It's all good but the timing, I notice your timing got better and better for each video posted but it's still off a bit. That comes with practice, try rehearsing it a few times more before you post it, it should feel so safe when you play it so you don't have to struggle one bit. I tried to vote but it says "you already voted", but I havn't. Could it be because the link already says "Vote=True"? you can only vote once with one ip i think And i don't think my timing is off. the video is out of sync a little but i decided it still sounded good. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- The only man it's OK to love is Paul Gilbert.

Understudy View Member Profile	Sep 18 2007, 06:38 AM
Sep 18 2007, 06:38 AM	GMC:er Posts: 231 Joined: 11-September 07 From: United States, Florida	John I give you an A+ for effort ! You seem a little hesitant as to where you were going from note to note. All of your skills will improve with practice practice practice. Take all of the input here for what it is, opinions that will help you grow into a musician with your own style and sound. I voted for you best of luck !!! If I can suggest going over some of the scale box lessons and hammering them until you can't see straight, those lessons have helped me greatly just over the last week. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Guitars Carvin DC-127 Ibanez RG-470 Accoustic Guitar Ovation Celebrity Amp Marshall VS65R Recording Gear Tascam Ministudio Porta 02 (Analog 4 track) Boss DR-220 Dr. Rhythm Digital Drum Machine Tuner Boss TU-12 Effects pedals Dunlop 535Q CryBaby, Boss CE-5 Chorus Ensemble, Boss CS-3 Compression Sustainer, Boss MT-2 Metal Zone, Boss DD-5 Digital Delay

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