E Minor/ Dumb, something i played to what Todd Simpson made as backing track
enlo22
Jan 2 2012, 08:33 AM
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Since i'm still a noob on this site I didn't realise the collab thing was over like year ago so i made this video and it's too late. I felt like might as well post it here and get some feedback.

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Sinisa Cekic
Jan 2 2012, 12:12 PM
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Pretty well played. You have a few notes that doesn't belong to E minor natural scale, but nothing serious, these are mistakes that can happen especially if the tempo is a little faster! Good job smile.gif

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Ivan Milenkovic
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This is very good I think you used Em scale good, and have learned couple of positions, and 5-6 good speed licks in that pattern. Now it's time to polish them up, it needs to be in time. Also, you should spend some time on bending as well, it sounds weak and slow. Try to make it sound very precise, go fast to bended note, and practice to do a fast release too. "lazy" bend is not what you would expect from a fast solo like this. Everything else is quite good, I can see you did some practicing. Keep rocking, you are doing great! smile.gif

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Jan 2 2012, 08:26 PM
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Thanks guys, like like always I'm paying attention to your advices. I see what you mean about the bends makes total sense. Also, yeah I did step out of the scale a little by accident! gotta keep on going.

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Daniel Realpe
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I would suggest that you work on long notes. Make them sound really musical and vocal-like.

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Alex Feather
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You could try singing the lines as you play them to get more melodic sounding lines. I posted a thread about this earlier. Good job overall.

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QUOTE (Alex Feather @ Jan 3 2012, 03:27 AM) *
You could try singing the lines as you play them to get more melodic sounding lines. I posted a thread about this earlier. Good job overall.


is there anywhere where I can find how to improve them?

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