Ballad Composition Collaboration, Final mix and comments |
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Ballad Composition Collaboration, Final mix and comments |
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Jan 22 2010, 04:12 PM |
ballad_composition_final_mix.mp3 ( 6.05MB ) Number of downloads: 309 Kyldee: Beautiful melody and generally, very good job. Talking about composition, the only thing that I think you missed is a little bit of explotion on the B part or the chorus. The sensation that I feel with this is that is a good melody, but it needs a change respecting part A. Besides this, I think that it’s still being a phenomenal work. Congrats! Rated htr: Very good job, very good combination of melodies in both parts. You perfectly catched what I meant when explaining what I wanted you to do. What you made is a real composition, not only a solo on a balad. Technically, I would suggest you to pay more attention on the bendings. The detail is minimum, but in some runs, it lacks a bit of tune. Congratulations for your work! Staffy: Very nice idea adding some acoustic lines to start, but I think you missed a little bit of “flight” in the chorus (maybe it could be nice to rise up a little bit the volume of the electric guitar over-recorded). Melodically, the idea is good, but for a composition, you have to accurate a little bit more the note durations, so it will sound more leveled. Apart from this, the idea is perfect, and with a little more of work on it, it could be a great song. Sensible Jones: Beatiful melody and very good work in both parts. Through all the last collaborations, I noted a huge develop on your playing, and that makes me very very happy. The only things you should correct are little delays on the tempo, but they are very little. I like all to be perfect. Congratulations!! ballad_composition_final_mix.mp3 ( 6.05MB ) Number of downloads: 309 -------------------- Check out my lessons!
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Jan 22 2010, 04:28 PM |
Wow, thanks for such a great compliment Santiago! I really enjoyed this one!!
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Feb 4 2010, 04:22 PM |
great collab! nice takes!
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Feb 5 2010, 09:35 PM |
Very good job everyone, nice takes, and good comments Santiago!
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