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GMC Forum _ REC _ Velvet Revolver Style Lesson

Posted by: dcz702 Aug 7 2013, 08:32 AM

Original lesson: http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/rhythm-guitar/velvet-revolver-style-lesson/

Posted by: Gabriel Leopardi Aug 7 2013, 07:30 PM

Hey dcz! Great to find this old lesson here!

Your take has a very good attitude and it sounds very rocker. Your tone is a bit more close to stoner than mine but I like it. The first riffs are ok, and there is just some more room to adjust the timing of it. In the solo section I noted that your guitar is a bit out of tune so the melodies sound weird, also your bending doesn't reach the correct pitch. Check your guitar tuning and work on this melodic part to make it sound on pitch.

Cheers!

Gab.-

Posted by: Cosmin Lupu Aug 8 2013, 08:30 AM

Hey amigo!

As Gabe said - your take is shaping up nicely, but the solo section still needs work - I noticed that articulation is a thing that requires a lot of your attention, so I would suggest you to focus on that a bit more, not in this take only, but in general.

Keep rocking,

Cosmin

Posted by: Darius Wave Aug 8 2013, 01:04 PM

Untill the 0:50 everything has a nice flow But then comes a bit of tuning issues. Maybe try to check those particular positions while doing next take Anyway nice job and good rockin' mood!

Posted by: Fran Aug 9 2013, 04:43 PM

Almost there, 7