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Posted by: Frank Jan 28 2011, 03:04 PM

Here is one of my song what i play,if you can give me some constructive ideas.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smAnXph5ahM Feel free to comment pleas.

Posted by: dark dude Jan 28 2011, 03:13 PM

Unfortunately, I don't know the song, but it sounded nice. I'm not sure how you can improve, it's pretty much there!

If I had to pick at one thing, at 3:34 that note sticks out in a bad way. Easily fixable and was probably a one-off mistake.

Posted by: mad Jan 28 2011, 03:37 PM

Don't know it, too - but it sounds very very good to me. Beside that from dark dude I recognized a chord that doesn't seem to fit at 2.20..
Looking at the overall playing I can just say great tone and very good playing.

Posted by: Ben Higgins Jan 28 2011, 06:27 PM

Nice cover Frank, I remember this song. You were just a little in front of the beat in a few places (mainly the main lead theme) but your overall approach was relaxed and you put a lot of feeling into it. You could maybe benefit with getting the song to the point where you're much more relaxed playing it without hesitation.. but still good !

Posted by: Frank Jan 29 2011, 08:28 PM

Thanks a lot Guys fore the comments.

Posted by: Daniel Realpe Jan 31 2011, 02:19 PM

nice one thanks for sharing!