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Posted by: RandomVictim Apr 5 2009, 04:55 PM

Hey everyone. I took the fusion backing track from a collab thread run by David Walliman and wrote a solo. Any thoughts would be appreciated
heres the original thread

http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=25412

120.wav ( 6.06MB ) : 366

Posted by: skennington Apr 5 2009, 05:29 PM

Nice!

Posted by: Artemus Apr 5 2009, 05:41 PM

Very nice indeed
I'd have liked a bit more vibrato use and one or two of your bends don't quite make it up to pitch. The ending lick is well used and finishes the track really well. Very nice

Posted by: sted Apr 5 2009, 06:45 PM

I think one of your bends was out of tune but other than that nice job, maybe David will leave a comment!!

Posted by: RandomVictim Apr 5 2009, 09:02 PM

thanks for the advice guys ill work on correcting those issues.

Posted by: David Wallimann Apr 6 2009, 02:39 AM

I like some of your ideas in there!
You have things to say on your instruments and that's something that is had to aquire.
Now there are a few wrong notes in there and poorly tunes bends.
Nothing that can't be fixed with a little work though.
Keep up the good work man, you're in the right track phrasing wise! :-)