Blue Note In A, Preliminary Take Looking for Comments |
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Blue Note In A, Preliminary Take Looking for Comments |
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May 20 2009, 10:24 PM |
Hi Tom, nice take!!
Here are few things I would like you to work on more. First, most of those C notes in main theme should be slightly bended, not that much to reach note C# tho but just a little bit and THEN mute it, not before the bend, it has to be more smooth execution. 0:42 lick has to be played before, bend was on time tho but note A was late. Also you were pretty much late with repetitive lick from 0:48 to 0:52, seems like you've learn it wrong time wise, for all timing issue I strongly advise you pay more attention at lesson's main video and listen closely, once it gets "into your ears" you just won't be able to play late! And finally a slide on A string, 5th to 7th fret, you played it with index finger. There is nothing wrong with that BUT you have another slide right after, same frets but on G string and guess what, you've got no more fingers! So you should play slide on A string with ring finger and then use index for slide on G string. You have really nice feel for this kind of playing imo Tom, now we have to clean up some mess and we're all set, good work so far! -------------------- Youtube
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May 21 2009, 08:24 AM |
You're welcome Tom, looking forward to your second take
to see how it is going. -------------------- Youtube
MySpace Website Album "Let It Out" on iTunes and CD Baby Check out my video lessons and instructor board! The Pianist tune is progress,check it out! "ok.. it is great.. :P have you myspace? Can i to personalize this for you guy?" |
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