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Nov 13 2010, 07:11 PM
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well basically i found out that my subscription expired and i cant joing collabs, so id like your opinions about my playing in this collab BT
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Nov 13 2010, 08:42 PM |
Some of the first bends are really good. Make sure you are consistant to the way you do them. The tone is really good imo for the style. A good take in general.
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Nov 15 2010, 09:41 PM |
Great job on this!
I would like to hear more bends in the second part of the solo, and possibly use of the blues scale as well. I bet it would add a lot to this! Your bends are pretty good, and there is no reason not to use them more often. Your sound is good here, although I would recommend that you increase mids a bit, and raise up the level of the guitar just a bit in order to be leveled with the track. Your tone is pretty good, sounds very nice. -------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE
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Nov 17 2010, 12:51 AM |
Very good take, I agree with posts above. I would only add to try making more interesting phrases rhythmically. Try mixing different note lengths in phrases in order to make the solo sound more exciting and less repetitive. Overall its a cool take and I like your guitar sound...
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