My Original Song!

Heres something I posted a demo of before which some people wanted to see a video for so here it is!



As well as this, a new one I just started working on. Not the best recording but it was only done quick!

https://soundcloud.com/liammacl45/sleep-walk-with-me-snippet-of

Feedback! :)

Hey guys!
So Ive not been looking at lessons on here because I keep doing stuff like this... really should go back to the lessons!
Anyway let me know what you think. I rushed it a bit and everything was done tonight so it needs work but Im happy with it so far

https://soundcloud.com/liammacl45/demo-song

Feed Back On My Original Song?

Hey I wrote this song really quickly yesterday and im looking for feedback! I know it needs work but Ill do that at a later date.

The drums are loops I set up on logic. The Rhythm guitar is just a quick take so there are a couple of mistakes but the lead covers them up a bit and the lead guitar is mostly improvised and its pretty obvious the couple of parts that aren't i think.
Anyway here it is.

https://soundcloud.com/liammacl45/another-day-unfinished

Lesson Suggestions?

Hey guys, so I do YouTube covers and I just done one of a song my old guitar tutor wrote with his band, Its very progressive, instrumental and probably the hardest song Ive done a cover of. Basically Im looking for a suggestion of a video lesson which is in a similar style since I struggle a bit to teach myself this style of guitar, Im just lucky that he showed me enough of the song for me to work the rest out, even though I miss out the clean part at the start.



Basically if you spot any weak points in this then could you give me a suggestion on how to improve on it?

Thanks

Introduction! Youtube! Equipment!

Hey! my names Liam and Ive been playing now for 5 year and Im in college studying music. My main influences are Richie Sambora, Joe Satriani, John Mayer, Alex Lifeson and many more. I have been doing YouTube guitar covers for almost 2 years now and Im hoping to take this further and begin gaining more subscribers and building on my channel with the aim of getting more experience and as much work as possible within the music industry.

Here is a few links to my videos:
Rush - 2112 Overture
Rush - YYZ
Bon Jovi - Livin' on a Prayer

The equipment I use:

Guitars:
Serling by MusicMan JP50
Fender 72' Telecaster Thinline
Ibanez GIO
Brunswick acoustic

Amp:
Line 6 Spider Jam
Line 6 Pocket POD
Behringer Ms16 monitor speakers

Recording:
MacBook Pro
Logic Pro
Focusrite Scarlett 2i2
Shure SM57