Waiting, New song demo - somewhere around metalcore and melodeath |
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Dec 21 2009, 06:32 PM
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Youtube got it slightly out of sync, so pardon that  Its basically just intro-verse-chorus-presolo-solo...I would love to hear criticism - both negative and positive
-------------------- my youtube account with riffs and ideas: https://www.youtube.com/user/Phoenygzus
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Dec 21 2009, 06:54 PM
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Well, there is some very good riffs here, but Im kinda missing the vocals or a strong melody. The sound, in my ears, is a little bit overproduced, eg. I think its too much reverb or something. But thats a matter of taste... Anyway, cool riffs and good playing!
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Dec 21 2009, 07:10 PM
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Thanks, yea there will be singing, but I am afraid to do the vocal parts
 (I sang in chorus etc... but I never did this sort of stuff...)
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Dec 22 2009, 12:14 AM
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cool riffs! I want to hear the bridge though
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Dec 22 2009, 12:23 AM
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QUOTE (Jakub Luptovec @ Dec 21 2009, 07:10 PM)  Thanks, yea there will be singing, but I am afraid to do the vocal parts (I sang in chorus etc... but I never did this sort of stuff...)Have a go for it man, You can never be anything than better and learn something from it!!!! //Staffay -------------------- Guitars: Ibanez AM-200, Ibanez GB-10, Fender Stratocaster Classic Player, Warmouth Custom Built, Suhr Classic Strat, Gibson Les Paul Standard 2003, Ibanez steel-string Amps: Fender Hot Rod Deluxe, Marshall JMP 2103, AER 60 Effects: BOSS DD-20, Danelectro Trans. Overdrive, TC-Electronics G-Major, Dunlop Wah-wah, Original SansAmp, BOSS DD-2 Music by Staffy can be found at: Staffay at MySpace |
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Dec 22 2009, 07:28 AM
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Very powerful man. I like it
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Dec 23 2009, 03:25 PM
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Song sounds very good! Production could be cleaner, there is too much space (reverb/delay) so its a little hard to distinguish all the sounds. Would love to hear vocals on this one as its an interesting composition!
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Dec 26 2009, 06:53 PM
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Great job mate, I love the panned riffs
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