great tone, and good frequent usage of vibrato. However, vibrato needs to be more even and more precise. Also, the legato triplets that happen from time to time, need to be more faster, tighter. I think it's a good take, and you need to fine tune already familiar techniques.
Your tone is great.
On the other hand the vibrato isn't so well and even out of tune. You should keep an eye on it. This is a big deal, I think you should try with another take.
There are a few time things but they are vibrato related, as soon you gat nice control on the vibrato you won't miss those rhythms.
Nice take. There's not too much things that I can really add to what the guys said before. You should pay more attention on your vibrato and start working all things slow. Make sure you dominate the technique on slow speed before going faster
so close on this one Gus, 7 is your average.
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