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Posted by: alibro Nov 16 2008, 03:45 PM

Hi, here is my first take of the lesson from Muris - Bb Minor Phrasing Beginner. Would be happy if some of you could say what I have to work on...
Thanks

 Bb_Minor.wav ( 15.94MB ) : 493
 

Posted by: Muris Varajic Nov 16 2008, 03:48 PM

QUOTE (alibro @ Nov 16 2008, 03:45 PM) *
Hi, here is my first take of the lesson from Muris - Bb Minor Phrasing Beginner. Would be happy if some of you could say what I have to work on...
Thanks


Do you mind uploading smaller file,MP3 maybe? smile.gif

Posted by: lcsdds Nov 16 2008, 03:51 PM

QUOTE (alibro @ Nov 16 2008, 03:45 PM) *
Hi, here is my first take of the lesson from Muris - Bb Minor Phrasing Beginner. Would be happy if some of you could say what I have to work on...
Thanks



Sounded very nice and clean!!

2 things to work on IMO!!

1)Vibrato-this can make an OK/good solo into an AWESOME solo!!

2)Work on the "Bb minor phrasing-intermediate" lesson!!! laugh.gif laugh.gif

GOOD JOB!! Keep working!!!

Monte

Posted by: skennington Nov 16 2008, 04:06 PM

Sounded good man. smile.gif Loved the tone and as said previously, some Vibrato would make it even better! Timing seemed to be good. Keep rocking mate!

Posted by: alibro Nov 16 2008, 11:21 PM

Thanks very much for the comments... I will try to work on my vibratio

And Muris, I tried everything to convert this file, but I did not get it, sorry... I downloaded programs to convert, but it did not work, I don`t know why?

Posted by: Muris Varajic Nov 16 2008, 11:27 PM

QUOTE (alibro @ Nov 16 2008, 11:21 PM) *
Thanks very much for the comments... I will try to work on my vibratio

And Muris, I tried everything to convert this file, but I did not get it, sorry... I downloaded programs to convert, but it did not work, I don`t know why?


No problem,try to expert it as MP3 after your record it next time.
What gear/software you're using for recording btw?

That was nice playing indeed,and sweet tone!
You could work a bit on vibrato as said above,
that would bring a lot to the whole execution.
And another thing,when playing stuff like that(read slower stuff)
just try to be little bit late since you kinda hurry with few notes.
Hurrying in playing is difference between ordinary and good player pretty often. smile.gif

Posted by: alibro Nov 17 2008, 05:35 PM

QUOTE (Muris Varajic @ Nov 17 2008, 12:27 AM) *
No problem,try to expert it as MP3 after your record it next time.
What gear/software you're using for recording btw?

That was nice playing indeed,and sweet tone!
You could work a bit on vibrato as said above,
that would bring a lot to the whole execution.
And another thing,when playing stuff like that(read slower stuff)
just try to be little bit late since you kinda hurry with few notes.
Hurrying in playing is difference between ordinary and good player pretty often. smile.gif



Ok I will do it next time.
Thank you very much for the advices. Now I hear it myself, that I`m hurrying with the notes.
I will try to improve it.

Thanks all

QUOTE (Muris Varajic @ Nov 17 2008, 12:27 AM) *
What gear/software you're using for recording btw?


I forgot to answer...
I use the pod x3 live directly via usb, recorded with cubase.

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