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Apr 19 2014, 03:51 PM
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hey guys, this is my latest guitar song I came up with
 , I used my Peavey 6505 +! i'm happy with how it came up. This time i tried to have mroe of a repeating feeling and tried to work better at connecting parts. I hope you enjoy it and I hope to hear your feedback https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I3NNgmc0Z8w |
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Apr 19 2014, 08:57 PM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Apr 19 2014, 04:51 PM)  hey guys, this is my latest guitar song I came up with , I used my Peavey 6505 +! i'm happy with how it came up. This time i tried to have mroe of a repeating feeling and tried to work better at connecting parts. I hope you enjoy it and I hope to hear your feedback https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I3NNgmc0Z8w Hi Enlo, the mix sounds a bit flat (at least on my speakers). I like the riffs you play. The multiple camera angles are nice! The slower piece at 2:15 is very good. I think it misses something that catches my attention as a listener. It needs a returning theme, a lead line or melody that returns as a chorus.. Hope this helps. Keep on rocking -------------------- My Youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/SparrowLesPaul
Download my music for free: http://jeroenvanderput.bandcamp.com/album/...tal-heavy-metal Listen to my first mini album "Victory" on Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/s...tory-mini-album My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/JeroenOnFire |
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Apr 19 2014, 09:01 PM
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Great to find a new track from you! You are a great example of how composing is something that improves with practice. This tune has a very good quality and I can say that the connection between parts is smoother than it was in previous songs. There is something weird happening at 1:37, you play notes that don't fit good with the tonality used there, you should review the scale / arpeggios that you are using. I love the clean section, it reminds me a bit to Metallica, and how this part evolves into the double kick section.
Two things that come to mind when I listen to the whole thing: - There are some riff sections that are still a bit repetitive / long. You should find a way to make this sections more interesting (as it happens with the part from 2:10 to 3:10, this minute is brilliant). - There is some catchy melody / section lacking. That part that you keep in your mind after listening to a song that makes you want to hear it again. Ok, this is feedback, I hope that it helps! Keep on the good job! -------------------- My lessons
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It happens often, so keep in mind that you can write a lot of songs, not just one 
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Apr 25 2014, 02:37 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Apr 25 2014, 07:22 AM) I have never heard about this term - thd hotplate... Hmmm.... guys? Out of what you are saying the Scarlett is definitely a better choice for you, so go for it mate!The THD Hotplate is just an Attenuator. So you can drive the tubes without having to crank the volume up to stage levels, works well for bedroom playing and still getting that tone you are searching for from the amp! -------------------- Guitars:
Ibanez S770PB (Natural Flat) , Ibanez XPT700 (Chameleon) , Sterling J Richardson Signature , Squire IV Jazz Bass (Sunburst) Gear: Neural DSP Plugins My YouTube Page. |
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Apr 26 2014, 08:43 AM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Apr 26 2014, 05:34 AM) yeah, I tried it today, and I was really happy with the mic sounds. As for the instrument input though.. it would always clip, even with the gain knob turned all the way down, From what I read you need a DI box? but i don't even know what that is! Here's a definition, mate: A DI unit, DI box, direct box, or simply DI (variously claimed to stand for direct input, direct injection or direct interface), is a device typically used in recording studios to connect a high-impedance, line level, unbalanced output signal to a low-impedance microphone level balanced input, usually via XLR connector. DIs are frequently used to connect an electric guitar or electric bass to a mixing console's microphone input. The DI performs level matching, balancing, and either active buffering or passive impedance matching/impedance bridging to minimize noise, distortion, and ground loops. For the DI box, in our band, we are using this one: http://www.palmer-germany.com/mi/en/PDI-09...itars-PDI09.htm We use it onstage usually, but out of what they are saying on the website, it looks like it's pretty hand when recording as well Read a bit through the presentation and tech specs and you will most likely understand things. Let us know how it goes, ok?
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Apr 27 2014, 04:21 AM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Apr 26 2014, 07:43 AM) Here's a definition, mate: A DI unit, DI box, direct box, or simply DI (variously claimed to stand for direct input, direct injection or direct interface), is a device typically used in recording studios to connect a high-impedance, line level, unbalanced output signal to a low-impedance microphone level balanced input, usually via XLR connector. DIs are frequently used to connect an electric guitar or electric bass to a mixing console's microphone input. The DI performs level matching, balancing, and either active buffering or passive impedance matching/impedance bridging to minimize noise, distortion, and ground loops. For the DI box, in our band, we are using this one: http://www.palmer-germany.com/mi/en/PDI-09...itars-PDI09.htm We use it onstage usually, but out of what they are saying on the website, it looks like it's pretty hand when recording as well Read a bit through the presentation and tech specs and you will most likely understand things. Let us know how it goes, ok?Oh ok makes sense! thanks for explaining. I kept my Toneport GX which works pretty good for using VST amps etc, and the focusrite works really awesome for the mic! so i think I should just do that and save my money lol. I'm going to upload a new version of the track and hopefully it's better. I edited the drums better and tried to make it more interesting. I'm probably adding vocals too because I love the mic pre amp! |
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