My Attempt To Write A Song, A ballad |
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Jan 24 2014, 09:07 PM
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So I have been consumed with this melody for days and nights.
Trying to get the notes together..I havent been able to practise or anyting (sorry Gab). I have only had this in mind! Strange indeed.. There are of course still work to do, especially with sound and Timing and a smoother way to play. I call this: No time to cry But here is a taste of it anyhow. Please point out mistakes and please give me suggestions. I¨'ll be more than happy //Thomas http://soundcloud.com/thomas-heino/no-time-for-cry -------------------- If it sounds good, it IS good! And if you think its good then there is gonna be someone else in the world that thinks its good:)Wise words from former instructor Marcus Lavendell.
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Jan 24 2014, 10:06 PM
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sorry?? why mate! I'm proud of you! You are creating. It's happening!
 This feeling of a melody all the time in your head asking for being decrypted is your own personality creating music. That's what we are looking for mate, so well done!There are no mistakes to mark when this happens, just keep on polishing and decrypting the idea.
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Jan 26 2014, 02:29 AM
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QUOTE (Nava @ Jan 25 2014, 10:24 AM)  Ah, thx Gabriel! "This feeling of a melody all the time in your head asking for being decrypted is your own personality creating music" Very fine words:) Where did u find them? What a new way to think. For me anyway  Nice to find this answer from you mate. I have a new master. -------------------- My lessons
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Jan 27 2014, 08:29 AM
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That was really pretty, and I liked the vibe. My only suggestion is as you refine it, is to think more like a vocalist. In some areas it jumps about a bit like its just going from one guitar riff to another rather than a melodic line.
Maybe when drums and bass etc are put in that will help it flow more but a melodic line helping to connect these elements will ensnare the listener and make them hum it for days -------------------- My SoundCloud
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Jan 27 2014, 09:53 AM
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Lovely piece mate! This is truly good music. Like the melody lines and the space in the mix
It's something perfect for morning coffee
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Jan 27 2014, 10:36 PM
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You're wellcome
As You see I'm one of many who enjoy it
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Jan 28 2014, 08:12 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Jan 28 2014, 08:37 AM) Hello mate - you can upload the wave file on SoundCloud - post the link here, but make sure it's downloadable  Deal?Yep, here it is then: http://soundcloud.com/thomas-heino/hardrock-idea Its 4/4 120 bpm. Hope u can do something about it and that my playing is synced  If its possible with one rhytm from 0.00 -0.20 and another in 0.21 - 0.41 and a third in 0.42 - 0.56 Maybe not exactly but u know what I mean when u hear it Cant say how appreciated this is and I'm looking forward to hear it and that u can show how I can do it myself! -------------------- If it sounds good, it IS good! And if you think its good then there is gonna be someone else in the world that thinks its good:)Wise words from former instructor Marcus Lavendell.
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Jan 29 2014, 09:22 AM
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QUOTE (Nava @ Jan 28 2014, 07:12 PM) Yep, here it is then: http://soundcloud.com/thomas-heino/hardrock-idea Its 4/4 120 bpm. Hope u can do something about it and that my playing is synced If its possible with one rhytm from 0.00 -0.20 and another in 0.21 - 0.41 and a third in 0.42 - 0.56 Maybe not exactly but u know what I mean when u hear it Cant say how appreciated this is and I'm looking forward to hear it and that u can show how I can do it myself! Got it mate Will throw it in the DAW and check if everything is cool with it - will let you know, although at a first glance, everything seems to be ok
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Jan 30 2014, 09:02 AM
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QUOTE (Nava @ Jan 30 2014, 05:49 AM) Awesume No hurry, take ur time Cosmin! I already have some ideas - I'll try and see what I can come up with
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Feb 4 2014, 09:52 PM
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Hey mate
How do you like this so far?
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