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Socky42 View Member Profile	Nov 12 2012, 12:38 AM
Nov 12 2012, 12:38 AM	GMC:er Posts: 606 Joined: 3-July 10 From: Manchester, UK	http://soundcloud.com/socky42/prison-of-mayhem-wip Obviously a very raw recording for feedback purposes You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My YouTube

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Nov 12 2012, 09:28 AM
Nov 12 2012, 09:28 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Howdy man! This sounds like a furious song but you need to work on the fast parts and make them sound tighter and in good timing. Otherwise it could make a good OST for a fight scene in a movie, if you are to ask me You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Gabriel Leopardi View Member Profile	Nov 12 2012, 04:17 PM
Nov 12 2012, 04:17 PM	Instructor Posts: 36.043 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina	It sounds good! I like the composition and the string arrangements... it's true what Cosmin says about your guitar playing, you should adjust it a bit to make it sound tight as this style requires. Keep on the great work! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel

Ben Higgins View Member Profile	Nov 13 2012, 01:11 PM
Nov 13 2012, 01:11 PM	Instructor Posts: 13.792 Joined: 11-March 10 From: England	Sounds brilliant ! It's like Judas Priest's Painkiller album meets Yngwie ! I think the arrangement and note choice is great.. just clean it up and tighten the timing !! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Lessons My Youtube Channel My Band

Socky42 View Member Profile	Nov 15 2012, 04:02 AM
Nov 15 2012, 04:02 AM	GMC:er Posts: 606 Joined: 3-July 10 From: Manchester, UK	Thanks for the help guys, I'll definitely work on the timing, which is probably the weakest part of my playing. Already managed to tighten it up a bit by changing the guitar and bass tones. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Socky42: Nov 15 2012, 04:05 AM -------------------- My YouTube

vonhotch View Member Profile	Nov 15 2012, 04:16 AM
Nov 15 2012, 04:16 AM	GMC:er Posts: 836 Joined: 25-April 12 From: Franklin, New York	I hope you will share a final version of this. I like the way everything is layered together. It has a great feel to it. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! --------------------

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Nov 15 2012, 08:15 AM
Nov 15 2012, 08:15 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Looking forward towards the final version myself You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

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