My Ms.pfeiffer Tribute, Some pre-production |
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My Ms.pfeiffer Tribute, Some pre-production |
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Jul 23 2010, 12:05 AM |
So here's the current demo of my tribute to Ms.Pfeiffer.
I simply took the raw bass/drums/guitar from the real recording studio (unmixed) and added some vocals. To clarify - the discussion in the choruses should be done by two different voices, but I have no other one here atm. What I really wanna hear from You guys is comments on the vocals, do they work, is the pronounciation OK??? (this song has mind-boggled me for nearly two weeks, since its in 3/4 and I've been unable to come up with any melody until now) Just shoot!!!! //Staffay EDIT: For some un-known reason I uploaded the file in mono... (guess Im tired...) But now its OK... Sheesh got no money, got no looks gonna love ya with no hooks Im gonna show it to you baby I'll do my best to make You satisfied, thats what Im gonna do gonna treat ya like a queen like the finest lady ever seen got a pocket full of treat and tricks, oh yeah I'll do my best to make You satisfied, thats what Im gonna do Sheesh Sheesh been wild bout You for Years from the movies where You appears been obsessed by the way You look, Huh,You look great! I'll do my best to make You satisfied, thats what Im gonna do Sheesh Sheesh SOLO begging for a chance to make my moves when we gonna dance I will prove it to You, baby , Yeah I will I'll do my best to make You satisfied, thats what Im gonna do gonna love you til the dawn and you will never make a yawn I've been prepared for this for years, Oh Michelle I'll do my best to make You satisfied, thats what Im gonna do Sheesh Sheesh This post has been edited by Staffy: Jul 23 2010, 12:25 AM -------------------- Guitars: Ibanez AM-200, Ibanez GB-10, Fender Stratocaster Classic Player, Warmouth Custom Built, Suhr Classic Strat, Gibson Les Paul Standard 2003, Ibanez steel-string Amps: Fender Hot Rod Deluxe, Marshall JMP 2103, AER 60 Effects: BOSS DD-20, Danelectro Trans. Overdrive, TC-Electronics G-Major, Dunlop Wah-wah, Original SansAmp, BOSS DD-2 Music by Staffy can be found at: Staffay at MySpace |
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Jul 23 2010, 12:59 AM |
ohhh, very tasty!
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Jul 23 2010, 08:26 AM |
ohhh, very tasty! I love your music Staffy, Thx. Daniel! Staffy it sounds Really cool !! .. but I would make the solo stand out more in the mix .. and you pronuntiation seems to be alot better than in your previous recordings.. ( but keep working on it ) Thx. Ruben. Yeah, ofc. the solo shall stand out more, its not actuallly the right take either - as I said this is a rough mix from the studio where we are making the record I had put some vocals on at home, so the guitar solo shall be done again as well as some fills etc. Also, I will put some more effort in the accent before we are making the takes of the vocals. Right now I'm studying redneck-american to get a southern accent, but its kinda weird to sing with that accent... //Staffay -------------------- Guitars: Ibanez AM-200, Ibanez GB-10, Fender Stratocaster Classic Player, Warmouth Custom Built, Suhr Classic Strat, Gibson Les Paul Standard 2003, Ibanez steel-string Amps: Fender Hot Rod Deluxe, Marshall JMP 2103, AER 60 Effects: BOSS DD-20, Danelectro Trans. Overdrive, TC-Electronics G-Major, Dunlop Wah-wah, Original SansAmp, BOSS DD-2 Music by Staffy can be found at: Staffay at MySpace |
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Jul 23 2010, 11:04 AM |
AWESOME STAFFY! You just became my number one non-instructor GMC:er idol!!
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Jul 23 2010, 04:04 PM |
and you can't "make" yawn, you yawn, or you dont:D but its a cool song Staf
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Jul 23 2010, 09:56 PM |
Thx. Guys, I knew I could trust ya!!!!
//Staffay One tiny mistake is in the third verse. It's gotta be: from the movies where You appear (without the s at the end). Right, appears is third person. I have to change that! Thanks! //Staffay and you can't "make" yawn, you yawn, or you dont:D but its a cool song Staf Hmmm, it makes some sense. On the other side of the coin You can say "make a move". If "yawn" in this case is a noun, it should be acceptable, but I dont really know if people use that as an expression??? Anyway, to be safe I will change it, thanks!!! //Staffay -------------------- Guitars: Ibanez AM-200, Ibanez GB-10, Fender Stratocaster Classic Player, Warmouth Custom Built, Suhr Classic Strat, Gibson Les Paul Standard 2003, Ibanez steel-string Amps: Fender Hot Rod Deluxe, Marshall JMP 2103, AER 60 Effects: BOSS DD-20, Danelectro Trans. Overdrive, TC-Electronics G-Major, Dunlop Wah-wah, Original SansAmp, BOSS DD-2 Music by Staffy can be found at: Staffay at MySpace |
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Jul 24 2010, 01:42 PM |
Hahahahha!! Excellent Staffay! You rock man, if she listens to this one she'll be ringing at your door
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Jul 24 2010, 02:52 PM |
Hahahahha!! Excellent Staffay! You rock man, if she listens to this one she'll be ringing at your door Well, that is kinda the purpose with the song. The bass player originally wanted to put the focus on Nicole Kidman, but I refused since she dropped to number third of my list. (Ana Popovic is of course number two) //Staffay -------------------- Guitars: Ibanez AM-200, Ibanez GB-10, Fender Stratocaster Classic Player, Warmouth Custom Built, Suhr Classic Strat, Gibson Les Paul Standard 2003, Ibanez steel-string Amps: Fender Hot Rod Deluxe, Marshall JMP 2103, AER 60 Effects: BOSS DD-20, Danelectro Trans. Overdrive, TC-Electronics G-Major, Dunlop Wah-wah, Original SansAmp, BOSS DD-2 Music by Staffy can be found at: Staffay at MySpace |
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Jul 24 2010, 06:53 PM |
That solo was the bomb - don't change a thing
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Jul 24 2010, 08:34 PM |
Awesome song man! This type of vocal line/backing is hard but you nailed the style well! I like the bass line a lot too - its funky!
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Jul 25 2010, 08:09 AM |
You got a point there, maybe you can theoratically say make a yawn (when describing a chemical process) but it's never used like that. Yeah, I think You're right, so I changed it to: "I will never make You yawn", that will be OK, right??? //Staffay That solo was the bomb - don't change a thing +10 Thx. but I guess I have to, since the solo & vocals was recorded at home, and the studio engineer wants to record everything at his place. And I got a little bit out of time in the end anyway... //Staffay Awesome song man! This type of vocal line/backing is hard but you nailed the style well! I like the bass line a lot too - its funky! Thx. Bogdan. The bass player actually was an awesome slap-player back in the eighties before he switched to double-bass. Nowadays he just plays the electric with me, since he's a full-time jazz musician playin double-bass. //Staffay This post has been edited by Staffy: Jul 25 2010, 08:09 AM -------------------- Guitars: Ibanez AM-200, Ibanez GB-10, Fender Stratocaster Classic Player, Warmouth Custom Built, Suhr Classic Strat, Gibson Les Paul Standard 2003, Ibanez steel-string Amps: Fender Hot Rod Deluxe, Marshall JMP 2103, AER 60 Effects: BOSS DD-20, Danelectro Trans. Overdrive, TC-Electronics G-Major, Dunlop Wah-wah, Original SansAmp, BOSS DD-2 Music by Staffy can be found at: Staffay at MySpace |
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Aug 23 2010, 01:28 PM |
Good solo!
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