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Nov 23 2008, 04:24 AM
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Verse 1:
exhausted from the night screaming from the light the flickering of the flames that dont give up without a fight the walls are closing in for this fight i cannot win wishing that those flames would tell me where i should begin Verse 2: the night has now gone on still unsure where i belong those dancing flames surround me and theyve been there all along when the light has darkened the room just fades away those flames are still around me those flames are here to stay Chorus: misery loves company but alls not what it seems to be when i have lost myself when i should think of nothing else cause misery loves company and everythings gone on to be a different way of falling a different way of knowing how things have changed but alls the same, yeah a set of lyrics ive just wrote, im still trying to think of a title though... its about how friends and family are always there to help you get through any problems, no matter how big or small any comments, good or bad would be great  -------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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Nov 24 2008, 02:45 AM
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the chorus does seem a little like that to me, but it makes alot more sense to me and those around me because they know exactly whats happened and whats going on and the chorus does portray it... the chorus was actually the first thing to be wrote and the thing that took the most time, the verses only took a few mins for the first draft
cheers for the comment
-------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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