New Original Recording, it's a rock song |
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Jul 24 2013, 03:39 AM
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so here is a new recording that is more of a rock song than a metal song. It's got a pretty laid back feel although the guitars are still quite high gain (and a bit scratchy to my ears) but it's a work in progress that I might add vocals to at some stage.
https://soundcloud.com/patrik-berg-2/shoulders -------------------- When your fingers bleed you're getting somewhere
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Jul 24 2013, 04:12 AM
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Very catchy sir! Vocals would really do it justice.
Sort of reminds me of a Hoobastank meets Green Day meets Fallout Boy sort of thing. |
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Jul 24 2013, 04:39 AM
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Sounding great ! Nice song structure and melodies - And I reaaly liked that feedback part (3:06)
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Jul 24 2013, 09:32 AM
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QUOTE (Patrik Berg @ Jul 24 2013, 12:39 PM)  so here is a new recording that is more of a rock song than a metal song. It's got a pretty laid back feel although the guitars are still quite high gain (and a bit scratchy to my ears) but it's a work in progress that I might add vocals to at some stage. https://soundcloud.com/patrik-berg-2/shoulders I really like this man, especially at 2:47 where you have the lead sound going on. Great melodies, kinda reminiscent of Rise Against. Once you get some vocals, and tighten up the general sound, it's gonna be absolutely killer! Great stuff. QUOTE (Spock @ Jul 24 2013, 01:12 PM) Very catchy sir! Vocals would really do it justice. Sort of reminds me of a Hoobastank meets Green Day meets Fallout Boy sort of thing. I agree. Some vocals would be great. I think the song name needs to be at least 12 words for it to be Fallout Boy  |
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Jul 24 2013, 11:40 AM
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Nicely done Pat! Happines flowing outof that tune
 And like You wrote it's rock so for me it's something new to hear this from You
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Great work man! I'm following you now on soundcloud so keep more of them coming 
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Jul 24 2013, 02:23 PM
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Killer stuff man! That part that was marked at 2.47 is epic! Maybe Cosmin is right about the verse, but I think that the best would be to start working on melodies to check which chord progressions need some little changes to make this one a very catchy song.
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Jul 24 2013, 03:50 PM
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Well done! Sounds good, many cool riffs going on here
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Jul 25 2013, 10:53 AM
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Good stuff Pat! But i preffer your thrashy galloping riffs more
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Jul 25 2013, 11:17 AM
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I'll write one just for you Slav
-------------------- When your fingers bleed you're getting somewhere
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Jul 25 2013, 01:20 PM
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HAha, thanks Pat, i already heard your "get thrashed"riffage , beginning riff reminds me a bit on iced eath- the path you choose.
Your sound's killer. what do you use? |
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Jul 25 2013, 09:18 PM
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Nice!! It's begging for vocals and a BIG CHORUS bit.
QUOTE (Patrik Berg @ Jul 23 2013, 10:39 PM) so here is a new recording that is more of a rock song than a metal song. It's got a pretty laid back feel although the guitars are still quite high gain (and a bit scratchy to my ears) but it's a work in progress that I might add vocals to at some stage. https://soundcloud.com/patrik-berg-2/shoulders |
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Jul 26 2013, 07:35 AM
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Might be you could talk to Ben - he had vocals recorded for his album over the internet by a guy that fitted the bill.
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Jul 26 2013, 11:56 AM
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Very cool song!
I can't wait to hear to some vocals over it. I think the theme is very catch. Maybe check out the drums vs guitars balance a bit groove feels a bit shaky in the main riff starting at 0:20. -------------------- For GMC support please email support (at) guitarmasterclass.net
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