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GMC Forum _ REC _ Take 2: Disturbed Style Riffing

Posted by: Rammikin Apr 25 2014, 12:43 AM

Original lesson: http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Disturbed-Style-Riffing/

Links to previous attempts at this lesson:
http://guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=51488

Posted by: Gabriel Leopardi Apr 25 2014, 07:23 PM

Hi mate! This is a very good take! Your timing has improved a lot compared to other lessons that you've recorded. Well done! This one is close to be perfect. There are some riffs that could be polished, some octave chords that don't sound clear (like the ones in the first main riff, those that are reached with a slide). But the overall is very good, great job!

Posted by: Cosmin Lupu Apr 26 2014, 01:02 PM

Hey mate,

There is improvement indeed, but as Gabi said, you need to play cleaner - there are some unwanted sounds - step by step, you will get there! Practice slow and focus on playing as clean and tight as possible!

Keep rocking!

Cosmin

Posted by: Darius Wave Apr 28 2014, 09:42 PM

Well done man! Your timming seems to be tight in this take. There are only a few spots with little adjustment needed - mostly the beginning /ending riff - that's where we need better separation between notes and at the end there is just a slight timming issue.

Posted by: Fran Apr 29 2014, 06:58 PM

Pass: 8