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LiamMacL45 View Member Profile	May 7 2013, 11:39 PM
May 7 2013, 11:39 PM	GMC:er Posts: 17 Joined: 27-December 12	Heres something I posted a demo of before which some people wanted to see a video for so here it is! As well as this, a new one I just started working on. Not the best recording but it was only done quick! https://soundcloud.com/liammacl45/sleep-walk-with-me-snippet-of You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

TreyDeschamp View Member Profile	May 7 2013, 11:49 PM
May 7 2013, 11:49 PM	Learning Apprentice Player Posts: 2.093 Joined: 1-May 08 From: Diamondhead, MS	Maybe it's just me but I'm not getting a video link man. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my Youtube! Add me on Facebook!

LiamMacL45 View Member Profile	May 8 2013, 12:00 AM
May 8 2013, 12:00 AM	GMC:er Posts: 17 Joined: 27-December 12	Thats annoying... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zjZw0fkFqMw Theres the link, try that Heres that sound cloud link too https://soundcloud.com/liammacl45/another-day You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

TreyDeschamp View Member Profile	May 8 2013, 03:48 AM
May 8 2013, 03:48 AM	Learning Apprentice Player Posts: 2.093 Joined: 1-May 08 From: Diamondhead, MS	I really like it man. The tone is perfect for that style! I really like how you put multiple skills together. While this piece seems simple I can tell it's something that requires incredibly accurate vibrato and feel in order to achieve the shown outcome. A+ man! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my Youtube! Add me on Facebook!

maharzan View Member Profile	May 8 2013, 06:31 AM
May 8 2013, 06:31 AM	Veteran Guitar Lord Posts: 2.381 Joined: 2-May 09 From: Kathmandu	While this might be your first recording, I highly agree TreyDeschamp. The bends and vibrato aren't perfect yet. I also feel that you are playing on the same octave or scale (sounds on the same set of notes) which sounds a bit sleepy. You have to have some dynamics and high / low playing along with 1 or 2 fast sections to engage the listener. Just my view. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Checkout my YouTube & my band Nissim's YouTube channels.

Darius Wave View Member Profile	May 8 2013, 12:42 PM
May 8 2013, 12:42 PM	Instructor Posts: 5.871 Joined: 29-November 12 From: Poland	Great tune my friend! Very pleasant to listen. If I could only suggest one thing - try to be very precise while tuning Your guitar...seems like those little tuning issues give some unnecessary loss to whole track.Sound like the solo is at a little too low pitch comparing to backing But anyway idea for the song is very interesting You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my lessons and my instructor profile www.facebook.com/DariusWave www.youtube.pl/vavrzyn www.niebonie.pl www.jammingcherry.pl www.facebook.com/druzyna.wawrzyna

gregc1 View Member Profile	May 8 2013, 02:05 PM
May 8 2013, 02:05 PM	Experienced Tone Seeker Posts: 540 Joined: 21-January 12 From: Florida, United States	Man let me say that I love the style and I love the song! Really great job. I agree with what the guys said as far as minor adjustments to make things even better and also to add to what Chandra was saying about dynamics, check out this video. You get the idea pretty quick how he goes high and low. It's a very similar style and I thought it might help to illustrate it. Anyway, great job again on the track. Looking forward to future versions. Edit: looks like the video embed is not working. Here's the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0hc3DZsjiK0 You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by gregc1: May 8 2013, 02:08 PM --------------------

Gabriel Leopardi View Member Profile	May 8 2013, 03:08 PM
May 8 2013, 03:08 PM	Instructor Posts: 36.043 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina	QUOTE (LiamMacL45 @ May 7 2013, 08:00 PM) Thats annoying... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zjZw0fkFqMw Theres the link, try that Heres that sound cloud link too https://soundcloud.com/liammacl45/another-day This is so cool mate. I love the feeling of your song. The phrases are very warm and enjoyable. I can relate your playing a bit with John Frusciante but your technique is even more precise. Keep on exploring this side of your playing. Congratulations! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	May 8 2013, 04:07 PM
May 8 2013, 04:07 PM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Very nice idea mate! Good groove and melodies, but I thing Darius' suggestion is very welcome and you should take care of the tuning Post more recordings, aye? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

LiamMacL45 View Member Profile	May 11 2013, 11:38 PM
May 11 2013, 11:38 PM	GMC:er Posts: 17 Joined: 27-December 12	Thanks for the feedback Suppose Ill just answer the main points since its mostly all the same. Its great that pretty much everyone seems to like it, as for the tuning thing I can see where you are getting it from but I tuned my guitar perfectly as I always do when I start playing. In fact other than yesterday when I tuned my guitar down a half step I havn't had to tune it at all since it stays in tune so well. And yes I will be doing more recordings QUOTE (maharzan @ May 8 2013, 06:31 AM) While this might be your first recording, I highly agree TreyDeschamp. The bends and vibrato aren't perfect yet. I also feel that you are playing on the same octave or scale (sounds on the same set of notes) which sounds a bit sleepy. You have to have some dynamics and high / low playing along with 1 or 2 fast sections to engage the listener. Just my view. First this isn't my first recording ever, although I am new to it, that shouldn't really be an important point in this But anyway I thought I'd answer this separately since I wasn't sure what you meant by sleepy. The piece is meant to be laid back and relaxed, almost to the point where you could fall asleep listening to it in the back ground so I might just take sleepy as a good thing. I know I play a lot in the same place although for this one I didn't feel going higher really worked so I stayed around the middle with a bit which is lower. I am working on improving my soloing in particular though You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

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