Attempt At Instrumental |
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Oct 26 2008, 07:08 PM
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I have been working on an instrumental for awhile now, my second attempt at writing an instrumental. I "borrowed" a progression from a satch tune and changed it a little bit and totally changed the solo section. I was wondering if somebody could give me some criticism. What do you guys think of the verse section. I like the tapped harmonics part, kind of a "summer song" feel. I don't know if I am crazy about the verse parts though. I have jammed over this progression for months now and this is what keeps coming out. I have zero songwriting experience, this is only my second attempt at a song. I also like the solo section but I haven't finished it yet, obviously. My question is, should I scrap the verse and try to come up with something new or should I keep working to improve what I have? Ignore the mistakes and timing issues, LOL!!. Any criticism, good or bad would be appreciated.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WkvYiIaUWEM Monte |
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The past part are: the tapping and the pedal note passage somewhere in the middle. |
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Oct 26 2008, 07:48 PM
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Wow that tapping is awesome! Did it take you long to practise that?
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Oct 26 2008, 07:58 PM
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this is some very cool playing. well done
maybe just a little more control but for the second attempt sounds great. Note choice is brilliant -------------------- Check out my <a href="https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/instructor/Emir-Hot" target="_blank">Instructor profile</a>
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Oct 27 2008, 12:56 AM
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Nice tune. I would try some wide vibrato to make the melody more fancy. Watch the tapping arpeggios at the end.
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