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Posted by: Spiderusalem Jan 1 2008, 12:05 AM

So this is really raw and nowhere near its final edited stage, but I came up with this at like 5AM
I read through my girlfriends journals, and she sounded so wounded in her words. I dont know how it made me feel but it wasn't good. This is the translation of that emotion

Girl with the painted face © 2007 - Thomas Paras

Show me the things 'dont want me to see
show me the woman 'thought you buried
give up your safest, most private place and
show me the girl with the painted face
I'll love her the way that you are

Show me the sky polluted with stars
show me the bright constellation of scars
show me the guilty, you know who you are
you take and you take, leave nothing to make up
the person you were from the start.

show me the wounds you kept to yourself
show me the words you hid on the shelf
give up your safest, most private place and
show me the girl with the painted face
I'll love her the way that you are

Show me the sky polluted with stars
show me the bright constellation of scars
show me the guilty, you know who you are
you take and you take, leave nothing to wake up
the person you were from the start.

show me the end, bitter like wine
tell me your weakness, i'll tell you mine
give up your safest, most private place and
show me the girl with the painted face
I'll love you the way that you are.

Posted by: The Uncreator Jan 2 2008, 04:56 AM

Very poetic, i love the line "Show Me The Girl With The Painted Face". It just rolls off the tongue well.

Posted by: Smikey2006 Jan 2 2008, 05:49 AM

wow pritty awsome.. what ever happened to that lyric thing you started Uncreator?

Posted by: The Uncreator Jan 2 2008, 07:13 AM

Today is my first day off work in like a month, so all my "Projects" are on hold. It will be awhile before its finsihed.

Posted by: blindwillie Jan 2 2008, 10:47 AM

QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Jan 2 2008, 04:56 AM)