Gmc Songwriting Collaboration (!), Let's write a song together! |
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Gmc Songwriting Collaboration (!), Let's write a song together! |
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Nov 2 2014, 04:21 PM |
I have done some more vocal experimenting and I also added some lines over Bleez' riff (01:16). It doesn't quite feel right to me yet though, so I need to digest it some more. I might try with a higher voice over Bleez' riff.
song_collab_vocal_test2_nov2.mp3 ( 3.42MB ) Number of downloads: 114 So far we got: Yesterday, I heard you say Be my man and make love to me But the problem is this, it wasn't to me! But to an old and long time friend of ours What do you do, and what do you say When your life is about to sway away [solo break] Unfaithful lies Compromise Sacrifice Lies & lies & lies! |
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Nov 5 2014, 03:30 PM |
Ok bear with me -
I wasn’t really happy with the vocals so I have re-recorded and tweaked. They are bit more consistent now. I am being picky here, because if vocals don't feel 100% right from start, I don't think the song is worth much. Any feedback is welcome! song_collab_vocal_test3_nov5.mp3 ( 3.36MB ) Number of downloads: 109 Yesterday, I heard you say Be my man and make love to me But the problem is this, it wasn't meant for me! But for an old and long time friend of ours What do you do, and what do you say When your life is about to sway away [solo break] Lies and lies Compromise Sacrifice Lies & lies & lies! @ Amir thanks a million for your kind words! =) I see your point with adding a 3rd line - though I think the vocals have been pretty busy up to this point - so some kind of breathing room here would be nice. |
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Nov 10 2014, 10:07 AM |
I'm liking where this is all going I think! Still wanting some solo bits?
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Nov 10 2014, 09:15 PM |
I'm liking where this is all going I think! Still wanting some solo bits? Yes of course, please send any ideas you have! |
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Dec 2 2014, 04:45 AM |
Kris please let us know when you'll have time to work more on this song
This post has been edited by Amir Razmara: Dec 3 2014, 06:49 PM |
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